Author's notes; First.. I don't own Love Hina, Ken Akamatsu does. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Second this is the first FanFic I post, the other probably won't be posted cuz I thought it was really bad. Third I'm originally from the Netherlands so my English isn't that great. Point out misspellings and I'll do my best to correct them when I have the chance. And last I hope that you like the way that I let Keitarou and the 'lucky girl' know each other and the way that I write... You'll see in the next chapter.
Her Green Under the Red Moon
Chapter 1; Lost in the Green
As I look in her green eyes I whisper to myself
"Why does she has to leave?"
"Is there something kei-kun?" She asks me
"Oh it's nothing" I reply. But that's not the truth. I know she's leaving and I don't want her to leave. Mom and dad say that it's for the best like this. She'll be staying with my grandmother, Hina, because mom and dad are unable to feed us all and grandmother Hina is.
"Kei-kun" She starts with a little sorrow in her eyes. I don't like that. She always looks so cheerful. I want her to smile all day long, I don't want her to have anything to worry about. "I'm leaving today, but I don't want to leave" She looks like she's going to cry and I say "Don't worry, you'll be going to my grandmother so I can come over to visit many times." Though she looks a little happier now, my words didn't cheered her up as much as I wanted to.
Mom, dad and grandmother Hina where in the inn for a long time but they've come out now. That means I'll be leaving and she will be left alone. There are others to play with but she said nothing in the world can replace me. Not even her brother who apparently looks a lot like me.
"It is time" Grandmother Hina says. "You have to say goodbye now Keitarou."
I look her in the eyes and realize I might never see those green eyes again. It is true that she's at my grandmother her place but mom and dad said we won't be able to go there for a while.
"I'll miss you." "I'll miss you too" and she kisses me on the cheek. Still looking a bit sad but not as much as before.
"Did you two said goodbye?" Dad asks. And we nod for we did.
"Come and visit me when you can" She whispers before grandmother takes her inside and mom guides me to the car. I can't help but think about her green eyes. Eyes like that you won't see again. Even dad said so.
We drive back to our home. Mom and dad promising that we will go back as soon as we can. We eat on the way home. Mom doesn't feel like cooking tonight and dad nodded in agreement, even mom and dad will mis her.
Even though mom and dad promised we didn't go back there... At all. And other things found themselves in my mind then her. I remembered another girl I almost liked just as much as her. Almost... We promised to go into Tokyo University together and live happily ever after. Still at the full or red moon I remember her, with her green eyes that I will never see again.
Author's notes; Well the first chapter seems really short to me but that's because I never used OpenOffice before.. I think. I just don't have any write program on my own PC so I decided that this would be the perfect time to try out OpenOffice. I can imagine that lots of readers already figured who our 'lucky girl' is but don't spoil it for those who don't ;) I'm not sure how old Keitarou is at the beginning of the chapter but at the end it's supposed to be some sort of flashback in the moonlight idea. I'll get on with the next chapter and you guy say what you thought of this one. Ne?
Next Chapter; To Hinata Sou.
