My first fan fiction so be nice! please review and tell em what you think or what i should do differently. Looking for an editor!
BPOV
"BELLA" Alice screeched, hugging me as soon as I exited the car. "How did telling Charlie go?" she asked.
"Um…I think he took it alright. At least he didn't have a heart attack." I said
"OK ..Great.ihavesomanythingstoplanwithyoucomewithme " Alice spat out at
vampire speed. I heard a few words including many things plan with you.
"Hey!" Edward interrupted " She just became my fiancé should I get her?"
"NO!" said Alice abruptly pulling my up the stairs to her room at vampire speed. "OK so I invited Charlie, Rene, and a few other people" said Alice trying to be discrete.
" How MANY other people?"
"uhh about 20" "ALICE"
"Fine ill lower it to 10"
"hhhpppffmm.."
" oh and um.. Bella? Well. I saw Edward inviting Jacob…. for your sake"
"uggghh Alice I'm going to bed"
I was trudging up the stairs to Edwards room thinking about whether Jacob coming was the best idea or not when his ice cold hands layed on my waist.
I was so used to his cold hands I didn't shudder instead I smiled as he picked my up and ran to his bed.
We just laid on his bed snuggling with Edward was all I wanted to do at this moment and he knew that.
EPOV
We were just laying there, my arms wrapped around her torso. She didn't say anything and I didn't either we just sat listening to each other. Though I didn't make any noise.
I could feel her heart beat and breathing slow as she fell asleep in my arms like she has so many other times. I stayed there her in my arms, listening to her heartbeat the only thing that calmed me at times.
Everyone was out hunting except Esme and Alice.
I wonder if she should wear white shoes or silver ones
I smiled listening to Alice's thoughts knowing the wedding was going to go perfectly.
please review and again remeber that it is my first ever fanfiction!