A/NOk tell me what you think.This is for a school project. so tell me what you think
I landed in the battle field.Bullets grazed all around me.Explosions of dirt and debre rained everywhere.Bodys laid all over.People screamed in pain.I walked the field.Bullets ran through me.I didn't feel anything.No pain,no lost.People ran through me.No one saw me,no one knew I was there.To them I don't exist.
I once did until; a bullet his me in the head. The only thing that reminds me of the living was the hole in my head. The pain I felt ,the last think I ever felt.The blood dried.I tried to wipe it off,But it doesn't work. I saw the ghost Walk the Field like me helping the living pass on to the other side.But I wanted to help him and only him.I walked closer to the Alli lines.
He kept firing his gun.Not a second look or the thought of who he hit.The family's that he would hurt.The gun became silent.I saw tears run do his cheek.I saw the hole in his chest blood gushing out. "This is the end." He whispered. "No its not."I whispered in his ear. His eyes searched but he did not see me. "Jessie?" He whispered. "Yes."Our eyes meet.He was getting close to death now."What happen?What are you?" "I'm dead David.I was killed for some reason I don't know.Mother misses you and grieves for me.She wants you to come home."He was struggling to breath.
"Its not your time David."I leaned down next to him. "What Am I suppose to do?"He was of breath.Blood was leaking down his mouth."Close your eyes."I told him."I'm afraid to die."He cried. "I told you David its not your time."He closed his eyes.I placed my hand on his head.A yellow light shinned from my hand.His face lit. The life slipping back into his face.The bleeding stopped,the wound gone.His eyes flickered open. "There no pain."He said.He moved his hand up and down were the wound should be."Go home David.Your suppose to be there."
I got up looked down at him."Were are you going?"He asked. "To my new home,Bye David."I spread my wings flying high in the clouds.It began to rain.Tears of happiness tears of joy,pain and lose. I did what I came to do.To save me brother from the same fate I have.I watched from the clouds as he steeped up the stairs of his home.He rang the door bell.Mother cried in joy for her son, Father was speechless.Tears leaked from my eyes.I wish I was there,But I must help other and save them if I must from the same fate that fell upon me.
A/N ok what do you think?My friend cried when I showed her this.Shes a sab anyway.hope you like it