A pokemon fanfic I wrote. Very good so plz read it. No flames. Its my first story. Constructive criticism will be most helpful.

Disclaimer: I don't own Pokemon and everything mentioned in this story belong to their respective owners. Including the story belonging to its author, me, Pokexpert. Expert on all things Pokemon. So, with out further ado... here is:

Tale of Two Brothers

CHAPTER 1: A Tale of An Introduction

Characters

Eevee – has shiny hazel eyes and is 12.

Buizel – is known for his legendary grin and is 13.

Vulpix – has super smooth fur, Eevee's best friend/crush, and is also 12.

Mienfoo – laughs a lot, Buizel's best friend/sparring partner/teamate/crush, and is 13.

Vaporeon – Buizel's, Eevee's, Leafeon's, and Espeon's mom, Flotzel's mate/ex-mate (Read on).

Floaztel - Buizel's, Eevee's, Leafeon's, and Espeon's dad, Vaporeon's mate/ex-mate (Read on).

Leafeon (Leafy) - Floatzel and Vaporeon's daughter, evolved when she was 14, Buizel's, Eevee's, and Espeon's sister, and is 16.

Espeon (Spy) - Floatzel and Vaporeon's daughter, evolved when she was 14, Buizel's, Eevee's, Leafeon's sister, and just turned 17.

Narrator POV

On a cold night inside of a well-built den, there were six Pokemon sleeping. One was a Buizel. Another was an Eevee. A Vaporeon, Leafeon, and a Espeon. Finally, there was a Floatzel. These Pokemon were a part of a very social family. Little did they know that the next day's events would change their lives forever.

The next day, the children's Mom, the Vaporeon, left to talk with her friends. The older two sisters, the Leafeon and Espeon, left to do their daily activities or whatever they usually did. The father, the Floatzel, stayed home like he usually did. The youngest sons, the Buizel and Eevee, left to play with their best friends, a Vulpix and a Mienfoo.

Eevee's POV

Like any other day, I started to play with Vulpix. First we played tag. Then, Vulpix did something weird. She ran into the bushes.

" I found this near some humans yesterday." she said as she pulled out a beach ball from the bushes.

"Wow! You actually went where the humans were ? That so dangerous but, its sooooo awesome!" I said.

I could of sworn she giggled after I said that. I really don't know why she did it but, it looked kinda cute. Wait, what am I thinking ? Vulpix is my best friend, nothing more. Right ? To tell the truth, she has the best fur I have ever seen. Oh my Mew, she is so cute.

"Ow!" I yelled, half because of the pain and half because of being knocked out of my thoughts.

Vulpix's POV

He just complimented me and then started to stare at me. Oh Arceus, those big hazel eyes are so handsome. Um, what did I just say, I mean think ? I can't think about him like that. I'm gonna forget that even happened. Oh, he's still staring at me ? Well, if does like me, that's why he staring at me. Naaa. I doubt it myself. It must be some of the juice from the Oran berries I ate that are still on my fur. Well, here 's something to knock him out that trance.

I threw the ball at him with all the power I could muster.

"Ow!", he yelped.

"I see you were staring at me. I must say I'm completely flattered. However, I can't play catch by myself. So, start catching and stop staring." I replied, with a bit too much authority.

I looked at my reflection in a puddle nearby. No stains, I thought.

Third Person Omniscient

She knows I was staring at her ? Oh, what will she think of me now ? What if she thinks the only reason why I became her best friend was because I love her ? Well, I do , dont I ? Well, what exactly is love ? Uhh, when I go home, I 'm gonna ask Ma about this, Eevee thought to himself. What he did not realize was that he was staring at Vulpix again and Vulpix grabbed the beach ball and threw at him again.

"I told you to stop staring. But, I really do enjoy it. It makes me feel like I'm a legendary in the flesh. Do it again. Please ? Pretty please? I'll be your best friend." Vulpix said.

She loves it ? Wow ! I definitely need to ask Ma, Eevee thought.

After staring at her for a good fifty seconds (which he really enjoyed), they started to play catch with the beach ball while standing on their hind legs. Then, they started to hit the beach ball with their tails back and forth.

Buizel's POV

While Eevee and Vulpix were playing with the beach ball, Mienfoo and I were talking. Dad was one of the best fighters in the entire world. I had always wanted to be just like him when I grew up. Mienfoo and I would fight and learn about some moves. Sometimes she told me about some math stuff. She kinda was a geek. We also had some sorta language for fighting by my grins. We taught Eevee and Vulpix some moves but because Eevee and Vulpix were a year younger than us so they really didn't know much about battles. Anyway, let's go to Mienfoo and I.

Mienfoo was my best friend slash sparring partner slash teamate. First, on anyday we would talk about stuff. Then, we would make up some combination moves and stuff like that. Finally, if we finished early enough, we went around the area trying to fight some loser team. So far, I had just got there so we would, as usual, talk.

"Hey! What 's up ?", she said.

"The sky." I answered.

Mienfoo started to laugh. Oh Arceus, I just love that smile. When we first met, I tried to be funny guy. When I saw her smile, I knew had to see it at least five times day. You see, first, she was just my best friend slash sparring partner slash teamate. Now she my best friend slash sparring partner slash teamate slash crush. Spy and Leafy talked about love a lot. Since I don't really know much about it, I had meant to ask Ma about love but, everytime was gonna, she was busy and I never got around to it. Though I might know little on that topic, I do know that Mienfoo and I have a connection that goes further than friends.

Mienfoo's POV

Okay. So, I think I'm in love with Buizel. You see he was very funny and all, but he started to enter my dreams since, I dont know when. And it wasn't those types of dreams, perv. He has a legendary grin. That grin just sends me to the Hall of Origin (Heaven). When we practice, I usually, okay, I frequently ask him if he is alright. Sometimes it's serious and sometimes its just to see how he's doing. He always answers with that grin. That I'm-okay,-no-need-to-worry grin. Or that what's-up grin. Or an are-you-hungry-because-I'm-hungry-and-I-don't-want-you-to-feel-hungry-while-I'm-stuffing-my-face grin. Basically, he has an entire language of grins. And all of them are more awesome than Ditto's DNA system. Oops, my geeky part is growing on me.

"Okay, let's do some double combination moves. Oh, I know how 'bout BSMs (Battle Starting Moves). Lets do LRC (Long Range Combo) move 6 with some CRP (Close Range Punches) move 3, 5, or 12 at Point Blank and do DM (Defensive Manuver)18. And finally we land in FS (Fighting Stance) 32, 34, or 9.", I proposed.

"No way that's what I was just was thinking", he said, agreeing.

"Well, let's start.", I said.

We started by facing each other. Then, I put my weight on my left leg while he put his weight on his right leg (Same direction). Then I made a Focus Blast in my hands while he made a Water Pulse in his hands.

"Okay. Throw it up at a … 15 degree angle with full force."

"Why ? "

"With the amount of force used and with the trajectory we have, it should hit that rock over there."

The rock looked like it had holes in it. But, I wasn't worried. Erosion probably occurred and the rock was most likely thrown into water ealier. Look's like my geeky part has it benefits.

"Okay now!"

When we fired our respective energy orbs in the air it fused together. Just as usual, I thought. Unfortunately, the Focus Pulse, if you will, was completely off.

"Huh ? It was supposed to work. I can't believe it ! It's Unbelieveable!", I screamed in horror.

Buizel's POV

Mienfoo got a stick and started to do some calculations. Meanwhile, I started thinking to myself.

Let's see. What can I do to impress Mienfoo. Maybe I can do some love joke or something. Then she might start to like me. No. She'll just think I'm kidding. Maybe I can take her to some sort of romantic place. No. That's too fast and then she'll think I'm weird. Umm. Umm.

I started to stare at the ground instead of Mienfoo while I thought of ways to tell her how I feel. On the ground were two Heart Scales. I did a silent prayer to Arceus to thank her for giving me the Heart Scales.

Okay. Now, how do I give them to her? Do I just walk up and hand them to her ? No. Its gonna be too awkward for both of us. Should I do a joke and slip them into her hand ? Maybe. But how do I say the joke ? Umm. Umm. Umm ...

"Let's see. The first step was correct so, where did I go wrong ?", Mienfoo inquired.

She saw me standing and deep in thought. Fortunately, she didn't she the Heart Scales. I slipped them to my tail which hid them from her sight.

"Well, are you gonna help me or just stand there like a fool ?", Mienfoo said.

"Okay. We could umm, umm,", I started.

"Can you help me with my calculations ?", she asked.

"Umm. S-Sure.", I stuttered.

"Okay. The first steps were alright. But somewhere during the last and second to last steps the error occurred.", she said.

I checked her work. Very thorough and very accurate. She double-checked every step. I got down to the steps she was talking about. Nothing seemed wrong so, I guessed it the work was correct. Then I realized something.

Pokexpert will be right back at ya with ch. 2. plz read and review.