A/N: Erm, hey y'all! looks at the few remaining reviewers who are currently giving death glares in return I guess a sorry won't cut it will it? What has it been? Over a year or something?
All I can give you as an explanation is this: Work!
Here it is re-written, improved and hopefully you'll enjoy it just as much as the original if not more. Hopefully more
Chapter One (Intro) – Mokuba's Will
"Come on big brother you promised!" pleaded the black haired munchkin as Seto scowled for the tenth time that minute.
"I didn't promise to go on holiday with Yuugi Mutoh and his bunch of pathetic friends Mokuba…"
The teen pouted, "You promised you'd take me somewhere Seto, you didn't say I couldn't bring friends. Besides big brother we both owe them our lives several times over…"
Seto pushed back his laptop, rubbed the bridge of his nose and sighed, "Very well Mokuba, we will take them with us. But I will not be nice to them, me inviting them on your behalf shows manners enough."
The younger Kaiba leaped up onto the desk before starting to squeal and jump with joy, despite being in his teens.
"Oh thank you Seto! Thank you big brother!"
The CEO watched in horror as Mokuba kicked the laptop and it tumbled through the air in slow motion, bounced, and then came to rest in several pieces on the previously immaculate flooring.
"Mokuba!"
Thank you to everyone who reviewed the first time round. Hopefully you're still here and can give me some of your thoughts on how it goes when you've finished reading the updated chapters.
Toodles anyway,
YT