Hey people I'm new here so please don't be too critical but do tell me what to fix
I woke up that mourning feeling really sick but that didn't stop Terra from barging into My house and running up to his room "Hey Koty wake up" "ugh, 5 more minutes Terra" she then jumped on me and laid there making him feel awkward "Ok ok ill get up." "Good because we have to go get our Pokémon" After a short walk to Professor Alex's lab, "Ah Koty and Terra perfect come here" the two trainers walked over to the professor "Koty because of your passion and love of Pokémon you get this female Torchick" "wow thanks professor" "And you Terra you are a rushed girl that needs an energetic Pokémon to be with you so here is a male Shinx" "Thanks Alex" Koty started to walk away when "hey Koty want to have a battle" "I guess" I sent Torchick out of her pokéball and sent her into battle she looked powerful and beautiful for a Pokémon. She sent out her Shinx "Torchick scratch" and she scratched Shinx it did some damage but then "Shinx use tackle" it was a direct hit and Torchick was in a lot of pain. "TORCHICK are you ok" Torchick nodded "Ok then use scratch again" her Shinx yelped "Come on Shinx tackle again" I couldn't believe what I just saw and heard did she even care about her Pokémon? "Ok Torchick end this with another scratch" and after she did that the fight was over Shinx was K.O. d then I smiled "Way to go Torchick." Then the professor spoke "Good job both of you Koty congratulations on your first victory now both of you would like to nickname your Pokémon?" "YES I want to name Shinx Zues" "Ok then I guess ill name my little Torchick here …" as I was thinking she nuzzled up to me and laid in my lap then I smiled and said "Her name is loveable" she seemed to like that name because she nuzzled me more.
Yeah so what did you guys think of chapter one a lot more chapters to come after this in the next one we begin our adventure hope you liked it i know it was short i promise the next one will be longer