Ok here is chapter one…if you like it, please put a review so I could continue….
See you later
Sandra Schezar J .
Chap 1 Changes
Hitomi was celebrating her 20th birthday, she was with her friends, in a restaurant
Amano and Yukari were looking at her as she was a little baby but something was bothering the couples, Hitomi wasn't the same since her last birthday, her life had changed and she was acting so weird.
Yukari always wanted to know what was bothering her so much but it just didn't work. ,Hitomi was always saying the same thing : "I'm just fine "
Finally she was heading back to Amano's car, when she suddenly got a vision……
As he walked through the window, Van look at the mystic moon and said ;" Hitomi if only….."
Van was blaming himself for being so foolish for not confessing his love to Hitomi.
Van grabbed the pendent and look at it as it was Hitomi it self: " you'll always be in my heart…..Hitomi…."
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Suddenly,
Hitomi fell to the ground, but sure Amano was there to hold her, she almost fainted
Vision:
She was in a big and large garden, when suddenly everything became black, she saw van coming over her, he was flying, but at the same time she saw another version of van, but this one looked different, she was totally confused, the other version of van was just getting away……..
She simply yelled: " VAN " but none of them responded…..
By this time she was already fainting to the ground
End of vision
Van took his horse, and told his men, if anyone comes after him, he'll be punished.
Is something wrong your majesty? A soldier asked… " how many times have I told you that I'm fine….j.. just stop worrying about me I'm…I'm just fine okay, now if you may let me go !"
Van left his horse to rest for a while, and he was walking across a river, then took his horse back,
When he unexpectedly fell from the horse, the last word he said was " Hitomi"
Then as he said her name he had been lifted from the ground and a huge light transported him to THE MYSTIC MOON ………
So guys if you want me to continue please review ok
Sandra J