This is my first fanfic so please review and let me know how I did. I'll update depending if anyone likes it lol. HERE WE GO!!!!
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Streets of Konoha:
Pain.
There was nothing but the pain. Curled up in a ball with tears rolling down his whiskered cheeks, Naruto Uzumaki laid in a dark alley off a main street in Konoha. He could see villagers walking by paying him no notice.
Once again the villagers had seen him and chased him for no apparent reason. He just couldn't understand it. It was the same every time. The villagers would see him, chase him and when they caught him they would violently assault him. Then they were screaming things at him like 'Demon' and 'Monster'.
Naruto continued crying and asked nobody in particular "Why me? Why can't they attack someone else?"
"I'm afraid that's my fault." Said a voice.
Naruto looked around for two reasons. One he didn't know the voice or who said it and two someone was actually talking to him.
When he couldn't see anyone he thought he must have imagined it. "I must be going crazy" he said shaking his head.
"You're not going crazy" said the mysterious voice again.
He thought the voice sounded like a woman.
This time he knew he had heard a voice talking to him. "Who are you?" he asked cautiously out loud.
"We'll get to that later. Right now you must get home and out of this disgusting alley."
Naruto slowly stood up wiping the tears away. "Now listen. I'm going to help you. When I say to, walk out of here and then run as fast as you can home. I'll take care of the rest." Said the woman.
Naruto decided to trust her. Even though he couldn't see her she was the first person since Hokage-Jiji that hadn't tried to hurt him.
Naruto slowly made his way towards the street, carefully making sure the villagers didn't notice him. When he poked his head out he saw 3 villagers on the left and 5 on the right.
"THERES THE DEMON!!!" several villagers shouted at once, making Naruto freeze in his place.
"Run now Naruto!" screamed the woman in his head. Naruto felt a strange sensation in his legs and looked down to see his leg enveloped in a red aura. Deciding to take the voices advice he started running.
Next thing the villagers knew the Demon was gone and all they saw was a blur of orange and red speeding down the street.
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Naruto's home:
The sun was shining through the window directly into Narutos eyes. He wearily opened his eyes and sat up. While rubbing the sleep from his eyes he remembered the events from the previous night. While he was trying to figure out how he had gotten back so fast, let alone without the villagers capturing him the voice spoke to him.
"I'm sure by now you know something about chakra?" said the voice from earlier. Naruto jumped slightly having totally forgotten about it. Slowly he answered "I know some things. Like you use chakra to do Jutsu's. You can use it to make some..parts...work...better....is that what you did?" he asked in a slightly scared tone. He wasn't afraid of the fact that the Kyuubi no Kitsune, the Queen of Demons just helped him escape another beating at the hands of the villagers, because he didn't know he had the Kyuubi sealed inside him. He was scared because somehow this voice had been able to manipulate his body without him allowing it to.
"Yes kit. I used my chakra to enhance your body, increasing your speed and strength 10 fold." Said the voice. "Who are you?" asked a now fully awake Naruto. "Before I answer your question, you must promise me one thing." Without waiting for Naruto to answer the voice continued "You must promise me that you will not be scared by my identity, and remember that if I wished you harm I would not have helped you last night." Naruto wasn't sure what to do. True they had helped him, and if they did wish him harm, they would not have done so. But it still worried him that this person would think he would be scared by their identity. Naruto made up his mind that it was probably better to have this persons help, regardless of who it was.
"Okay. I promise that I won't be scared of your identity but you must promise me one thing in return." Naruto said in a clear and confidant voice. "If I scared you can't get angry at me or hold it against me." Kyuubi thought about this. It was a bit much to ask a 6 year old to not be scared of a thousands year old demon, let alone the Queen of Demons. "Okay kit. I accept that. Now close your eyes and concentrate on entering your mind." "But I thought th-.." "No buts. Just do it. All, including my name and why I am inside your mind, will be explained." said the mysterious voice.
Naruto lay back on his bed with his eyes closed. Concentrating on entering his mind. Several minutes passed like this. As the minutes passed him by he heard a tap dripping. A few more minutes later Naruto couldn't take the dripping of the tap any longer and opened his eyes to find the source of it. What he saw shocked him. He was no longer lying on his bed, but in a concrete room with pipes all of the walls. He saw that several of the pipes were dripping. Explains the dripping but where am I? He thought.
Naruto raised himself off the ground and started down the only opening in the room. After a few minutes of walking he came to a halt. There were 3 paths ahead of him he could take. He looked ahead and saw only darkness. He did not want to go that way. Looking to the left he saw that it was a short path then it turned right. On the wall he saw what looked like a red light flickering. Possibly a fire of some sort. He wasn't afraid of fire, unless the villagers were the ones with the fire. He shuddered at the thought. Looking to the left he saw what looked like a cage. Curiosity got the better of him as he started off down the right path.
Walking down the path all light disappeared but he could still see the end so he wasn't worried. When he finally emerged from the tunnel he saw that it was indeed a cage. In front of a tiny Naruto stood a set of gates at least 40 feet high. Trying to peer through the gates, Naruto could see nothing but darkness. In an attempt to try and see something he walked up to the gates and gripped two bars and stuck his head in. "So you finally made it kit." Naruto was so startled by the voice that he fell back and scrambled as far back as he could. He could tell that it was the same voice from earlier but this time, this time it was much much louder.
"Do not be afraid kit. Why are you cowering back th-... Oh the voice." Naruto was still cowering back against the wall when he heard an almost angelic voice sing out. "Is that better kit?" Naruto cautiously stood up and nodded his head slowly. "I'm sorry about that. Come closer and we shall talk." sang the voice again.
Slowly and cautiously Naruto made his way towards the bars. When he got there he looked through the bars once again only this time he saw a woman standing in the darkness. Naruto gasped. He'd never seen some one as beautiful as her before. The woman in front of him was standing about 5' 7" and had long crimson hair that reach halfway down her back. She was wearing a tight fitting kimono that showed off certain...assets. She also had 9 red tails with white tips fanned out behind her and fox ears on top of her head that were red with white tips aswell.She walked closer to the bars and Naruto noticed that her eyes were pure red with slitted pupils. She was also smiling at him.
When she finally reached that bars she sat on a chair that Naruto hadn't noticed was there before. "So we finally meet face to face." She sang out.
"Who are you?" Naruto asked, slightly annoyed at how many times he had asked.
"Me? Why, I'm the Kyuubi no Kitsune, and I'm here to help you." she said with a devilish grin.
Naruto's eyes went wide. "YOUR the Kyuubi no Kitsune? The Demon that attack Konoha 6 years ago?" he asked quickly. Kyuubi visibly flinched at the mention of the attack. "Yes. I attacked Konoha 6 years ago. Now let me explain things before you ask more questions. It will save time later." she said.
"6 years ago I attacked Konoha. The reason behind the attack are my own so do not ask. In time I may tell you but it is highly unlikely. Anyway, as I approached the walls of Konoha, ninja started appearing throughout the forest. I brushed them aside with my paws and tails, probably killing many in the process. I was only looking for two specific ninja. Before I reached the gates a man named Namikaze Minato appeared before me in a flash of yellow. As I started to charge at him he summoned that toad of his, Gamabunta, the chief toad, who immediately started a fight with me. While I was distracted with Gamabunta, the Yondaime was doing seals with inhuman speed. Kyuubi started looking at her feet. "After several minutes Gamabunta threw me into the air, (which is no easy feat) and Namikaze appeared on my head and placed his glowing fingertips on me. When I awoke I was in this cell." explained Kyuubi.
Naruto's mind was going a million miles a minute. The first comprehensible question that came to his mind was "Who were the two ninja you were looking for?"
Kyuubi looked up at Naruto. She started as if about to answer then changed her mind. "That's not of importance. The most important thing now is the next question I have for you." Naruto continued staring at her with his cerulean blue eyes and asked "And what might that be?"
"How do you feel about the villagers?" she asked simply. Naruto was shocked. He had never thought about how he felt towards the villagers. He just always wondered why? Why him? Well now he knew the answer to that but, it still never occurred to him that he didn't know how he felt about them.
Kyuubi could tell Naruto was thinking by his facial expressions so she just sat on the chair with her tails waving about. After several minutes Naruto looked up and with a feral look on his face screamed "I HATE THEM!!!"
So there we have it. R&R
Peace
