*~*~*## Ok this is a story I'm gonna try and make it has nothing to do with
any of Harry's years at hogwarts. This story will prolly have Harry in it
but he's not in school. Anyway it's about another girl that I'm gonna name
Shanna and in case anyone didn't know that's my name to (Shah-nuh) this
is just gonna be the first sample for everything I may write more later but
it'll be easier to decide if you people tell me what you think of it in
your reviews##*~*~*
*~*~STORY~*~* She opened her eyes and sat up blinking a few times as her eyes slid in and out of focus. She looked around the room rubbing her head trying to remember what happened. She had been walking alone in the woods near her house and listening to her headphones. Then, what happened? She thought hard. Her dog that she had takin with her started to bark fiercely. She thought harder, but that was all. The last thing she could remember was the searing pain in her head as she started to turn around.
She sat up looking around the room and suddenly realized she wasn't the only one there. A blond haired boy was standing and staring out the window. Her eyes slipped out of focus a little again and she rubbed the back of her sore head. Just then he turned to her and smiled.
"Your finally up?" he asked her
"Uh. yea. but. where the hell are we?" she asked not being remotely careful with her words.
He laughed at her a little but frowned "I don't know."
She looked puzzled at him "well. who are you?" she stopped "I'm sorry. that was really rude"
He didn't seem at all offended "I'm Scott."
"Shanna. not Shayna or Shauna.. Just Shanna" She said. This was an automatic thing for her to say since everyone got her name wrong.
He stared at her for a moment looking like he was trying to figure something out.
"What?" she asked seeing his stare.
"It's nothing."
"It's not nothing or you wouldn't have given me that look"
"What look?"
"The look you just gave me. But answer my question"
He stared for another second and said, "It's just. I knew a girl I used to talk to online. and she said the same thing. and her name was the same too"
Now it was her turn to stare "Wait. Scott? No. that can't be right"
"What?" he asked looking back at her
"Um.. I don't know but I think I'm that Shanna." she said looking a little bit surprised.
They both stared at each other and then the door burst open and a tall man with cold gray eyes came in. He stared at Shanna "so your finally up." he said in a raspy voice that made Shanna shiver a little.
He turned his head to Scott but said nothing. Then he slammed the door shut after mumbling something about babysitting. They both stared at the door as they listened to him telling someone that they were up.
"Well. that was a little bit strange." Shanna said breaking the silence.
Scott nodded. Shanna started to stand up but it made her dizzy so she sat again. Rubbing her head she looked over at Scott and asked, "How'd you get here?"
He frowned and replied, "That guy who just came in here and some other guy convinced me that they were camp counselers. then when I worked out that they weren't they knocked me out. What about you?"
She thought again "I was walking around in the woods in my house when I heard my dog barking. Then I guess someone knocked me out. I don't know who though." She drew a knee up and leaned back against the wall thinking for a second why she had been out in the woods. Then she remembered: The dream. That awful dream that came on her thirteenth birthday. That dream that drove her out of her bed in the middle of the night to seek peace in the woods. That dream had come again.
~*~*~*## Ok now please review!! I need reviews to tell me how it is!! Please!! ##*~*~*~
*~*~STORY~*~* She opened her eyes and sat up blinking a few times as her eyes slid in and out of focus. She looked around the room rubbing her head trying to remember what happened. She had been walking alone in the woods near her house and listening to her headphones. Then, what happened? She thought hard. Her dog that she had takin with her started to bark fiercely. She thought harder, but that was all. The last thing she could remember was the searing pain in her head as she started to turn around.
She sat up looking around the room and suddenly realized she wasn't the only one there. A blond haired boy was standing and staring out the window. Her eyes slipped out of focus a little again and she rubbed the back of her sore head. Just then he turned to her and smiled.
"Your finally up?" he asked her
"Uh. yea. but. where the hell are we?" she asked not being remotely careful with her words.
He laughed at her a little but frowned "I don't know."
She looked puzzled at him "well. who are you?" she stopped "I'm sorry. that was really rude"
He didn't seem at all offended "I'm Scott."
"Shanna. not Shayna or Shauna.. Just Shanna" She said. This was an automatic thing for her to say since everyone got her name wrong.
He stared at her for a moment looking like he was trying to figure something out.
"What?" she asked seeing his stare.
"It's nothing."
"It's not nothing or you wouldn't have given me that look"
"What look?"
"The look you just gave me. But answer my question"
He stared for another second and said, "It's just. I knew a girl I used to talk to online. and she said the same thing. and her name was the same too"
Now it was her turn to stare "Wait. Scott? No. that can't be right"
"What?" he asked looking back at her
"Um.. I don't know but I think I'm that Shanna." she said looking a little bit surprised.
They both stared at each other and then the door burst open and a tall man with cold gray eyes came in. He stared at Shanna "so your finally up." he said in a raspy voice that made Shanna shiver a little.
He turned his head to Scott but said nothing. Then he slammed the door shut after mumbling something about babysitting. They both stared at the door as they listened to him telling someone that they were up.
"Well. that was a little bit strange." Shanna said breaking the silence.
Scott nodded. Shanna started to stand up but it made her dizzy so she sat again. Rubbing her head she looked over at Scott and asked, "How'd you get here?"
He frowned and replied, "That guy who just came in here and some other guy convinced me that they were camp counselers. then when I worked out that they weren't they knocked me out. What about you?"
She thought again "I was walking around in the woods in my house when I heard my dog barking. Then I guess someone knocked me out. I don't know who though." She drew a knee up and leaned back against the wall thinking for a second why she had been out in the woods. Then she remembered: The dream. That awful dream that came on her thirteenth birthday. That dream that drove her out of her bed in the middle of the night to seek peace in the woods. That dream had come again.
~*~*~*## Ok now please review!! I need reviews to tell me how it is!! Please!! ##*~*~*~