So after a first attempt at this story I failed miserably so I'm here to correct my mistakes. But first there are going to be some changes.
Hitomi, Alli, and Isaac will be living in Konoha
Isaac will be alive
Now of course I'm keeping some things from the original story like Hitomi still having Azura and Psynergy. But the plot will be mostly different. Now enough of my rambling, onto the story.
"Hey" - Demon Talking
"Hey" - Demon Thinking
"Hey" - Person Talking
"Hey" - Person Thinking
Tails of the Four Lords Redux
Prologue
"Finally class is over." I said while walking away from the academy.
"What do you mean? You were sleeping through the whole thing." said a voice behind me.
"Well you can't really blame me can you Alli?" I said turning towards my sister. She had wavy black hair going down to the middle of her back along with purple eyes much like our mother. She was wearing a white tank top underneath a black bomber jacket along with grey cargo pants and the standard shinobi sandals.
"Um yes I can. You're the reason Iruka kept us late." Alli said. I sighed at her answer,"Anyway didn't dad tell you that you needed to do something?"
"Oh yeah! He asked me to go get some things for dinner." I started to run off, "You can go on ahead home. I'll only be like ten minutes." I yelled over my back.
-At the store-
As I arrived I saw a boy wearing an orange hoodie and cargo pants being chased out of the store by the owner who was screaming "Get back here you demon."
"Azura do you know that kid?" I thought speaking to my tenant, Azura. Azura had steel gray fur and a scar over his left eye while his other eye was violet.
"Of course I do kid. That is Naruto Uzumaki and also someone you will befriend soon."
"Oh? And why is that?"
" Because he holds my most trusted bodyguard Izumi, the 8 tailed White Wolf."
"Interesting." I smiled at him while he was running away and walked in the store. I walked around grabbing the things I need to get for dinner. As I walked toward the front desk to pay for the items I noticed something in the mirror behind me. As I looked into the mirror I saw someone who looked like me but he was covered in blood. I blinked my eye and it returned to normal. I stared at the mirror to see if it would happen again but it didn't. I was wearing a black and grey striped hoodie with a white tank top underneath. I had on black cargo pants and black combat boots. My left "eye", as I didn't have one much like my father, was covered with a medical eyepatch and my other eye was blue.
I turned back around to see that nobody was at the counter yet. I shrugged, put the items into bags and walked out.
"Cheers."
As I walked toward my house I noticed something… off. Normally at the position I was at there would be a kid asking me to play with them or an old lady who needed help with her bags. But there was nothing to see or hear. I started to rush to the house and then I smelled blood. I started sprinting to my house only to see it in ruins. In front of my house was the man I looked up to the most, my father Isaac. He had blond hair and blue eyes. ( outfit is pretty much Isaac's Golden Sun Dark Dawn outfit. ) He was bleeding from a stab wound in his abdomen. By the looks of how much blood there was it told me one thing.
"He's not going to make it." I ran up to him crying.
"Hi...to...mi." Isaac whispered out. I leaned closer to him to hear what he had to say. He opened his hand and gave me a crystal.
"Take this...and open the...vault and take…the things in there." He said. I gripped his hand and there crystal. I nodded while still crying. After that he opened his eye and a fluorescent blue flame came out of it and went into my left "eye", "With this... I will...Always be with you." Isaac whispered smiling before death took him. I smiled and closed his eyes to prepare him for his eternal slumber. I looked up at the house and heard something.
"Help!" a voice shouted. The voice sounded like that of a young girl's and it came from the house meaning it was,"ALLI!" I yelled running into the house with tears in my eyes. As I arrived at the source of the scream I saw Alli on the floor knocked out and thankfully not bleeding. I started to run up to her when suddenly I heard something. I turned around to check what it was, but I was knocked out. The last thing I heard was, "We're gonna have fun with you."
That's a wrap. Now I know that there are some questions as to who knocked out Hitomi and kidnapped him and Alli and who killed Isaac which will be explained in later chapters. There is going to be a part 2 to the prologue but for now, feel free to review I need all the criticism I can get.