Hello!
I do not own Naruto, of course because if i did i would not be writing this story.
I'm doing this for enjoyment and to get all the ideas out of my head so i have space to revise for my exams
by the way, in chapter 3 is when they become genin, later on in much, much further chapters will take place a few days after Naruto defeated pain and by then Danzo will have been selected hokage, so yeah, it's only going to be in the next chapter that they will still be young, so don't worry you won't get as bored as you probably did on this one, just stick with it for a while and remember it takes hours to write and seconds to review. ( i did not steal that quote from someone else and thought "good idea! I'll write that too to guilt-trip people into reviewing muwahahaha ) ;)
Chapter 1 : The phrase "Your in deep shit" has many meanings
Naruto giggled to himself. Being only six years old he could easily slip under the radar of Konoha nin, and also able to fit through small windows, such as that as the window lodged in the wall of the third Hokage's bedroom.
Luckily for the boy, Hiruzen Sarutobi was stifling through the dreaded paper-work on his desk, silently begging for a disaster to strike, forcing him to abandon his burden and face a dangerous foe instead.
"Hmm.." he said out loud to no one in particular. "Maybe Naruto will pay me a visit or pull ridiculous prank, yes! That always happens, then I can put this off until tomorrow, so all have to do is wait for the brat to turn up." the third hokage triumphantly put his papers aside and sat patiently waiting for the little 'nuisance'
Unfortunately for the old man, Naruto was pulling his stunts elsewhere. The young boy climbed through the window that just so happened to be pushed open slightly(well enough for a six years arm to slide through and undo the latch. And he rolled ungraciously to the floor humming to himself the 'mission impossible' theme tune "Dum-dum. Dum-dum-dum-dum. Dum-dum-dum-dum. Da-da-DA. Da-da-DA."
Naruto brought the palm of his hand up to his face. "step 1, infiltration. Check" he whispered as he ticked off the first line of the list he had drawn on his hand with a marker pen. Well done Naruto, that's going to come off easily. *face palms*
"Step 2, find an awesome jutsu that will make me the best ninja in the land of fire, (I might possibly be made hokage, hehe)" Naruto crawled under the third's bed. "no nothing under he-hey was this?!" The boys hand had brushed against a small book, well-worn with cracks at the spine.
"Maybe this has awesome jutsu in it!" Naruto exclaimed as he flung himself on the book and opened it up to the middle page. He began to read aloud:
"'I love you.' she whispered to me and then we brought our lips together. We stayed like that for a long time until she started running her hands down my legs, and finally began to caress my-AAAAHHHH!" The book was thrown across the room and Naruto scuttled to the other side, brought his knees up to his stomach, wrapped his arms around his legs and started rocking himself, all the while with a scared shocked expression on his face
"I'm sorry old man! After this I'm never coming in here again, I promise, I'll try to be a good boy from now on, just NEVER EVER let me read a book again!" he whimpered, and carried on muttering it to himself. And hour passed before the six-year old finally stirred again. His belly grumbled and it was the thought of ramen that stopped him slipping into the abyss of insanity.
Clutching his belly, Naruto stood up and began surveying the massive bookcase next to him that contained hundreds of scrolls. Overwhelmed by the amount he had to go through, Naruto devised a 'cunning' plan on how to go about finding this jutsu:
"Enie, meanie, minie, mo, catch a nindog by its tail, when it squeals, let it go enie, meanie, minie, MO!" he yelled the last word before his finger landed on a yellow scroll.
"Wow! I'm so smart, this one looks so cool! Just like me!"
And because Naruto is such a genius, he didn't even bother to read the name of said jutsu. laying down on his stomach on the floor with his legs crossed and in the air, he carefully unwrapped the scroll and begun the difficult task of reading.
"Okay so I...uhuh...uhuh..wha!-oh i get it...yes...right, but wait...oooooh" Naruto's face lit up with awe, that's is until reading the bottom note:
Only Minato Namikaze (Fourth Hokage) has been able to use this technique successfully
Unfortunately for Naruto he didn't read the smaller note below.
"Right I can do this." Naruto breathed heavily. "If the fourth hokage managed to and if I pull it off, then I should be able to is well if I'm gonna be hokage someday, ya know!" he shouted to no one in particular. He looked for something in the Hokage's office that he would be able to place on a leaf ninja. The six-year old desperately wanted to see outside of konoha's gates and it seemed like a good idea.
He pulled open a drawer of the bedside cabinet and found inside a kunai. "whoa!" Naruto's eyes reflected the gleam of the metal. He felt mesmerized with it.
"This is perfect!"
He grabbed the kunai and attempted to perform the seal, and after many times a seal appeared, assuming that it was a successful seal Naruto squealed with glee, then quickly glanced around to make sure no one heard act like a such a girl. unbeknownst to Naruto that while he was performing the seal, his eyes had turned red and pupils taking on a slitted form.
Meanwhile a group of leaf ninja were busy at the entrance gates counting their weapons while waiting for their other team member to catch up. One of them sighed in exasperation.
"Where fuck is that damn shinobi!" Growled an annoyed jonin. Asuma Sarutobi lit the cigarette he had just placed in his mouth.
"Most definitely caught up on the youthful path to becoming a better ninja!" Remarked Might Guy. Asuma face palmed. He could not get a break. Being put on a mission with Guy is like being stuck with a 6 year old girl who cries when she's happy after just having a small emotional talk and hugs people randomly, also the whole youthfulness thing is just getting on his nerves.
"Hey guys, sorry I got stopped along the way by a small blonde child who requested my help" Kakashi stated mildly. Asuma smirked.
"Liar"
"Actually this time it's true."
"This time...eh? So you admit it then, that you were late all the other times 'coz you were reading Icha Icha, I presume?"
"Well-i...err...You see the thing is..." Kakashi scratched the back of his head in embarrassment.
"That's what I thought, now let's get a move on." Asuma turned on one heel and immediately took off in the direction of the forest. Kakashi right behind him with Guy at the rear "Yosh we will complete this task three times faster than the mission we did yesterday, no wait-four times faster-wait five…!"
Both Kakashi and Asuma sweat-dropped.
Naruto grinned. He managed to trick a jonin into helping him tie his shoelaces, and in return for the favour Naruto gave him the kunai that he had 'come across in a ditch somewhere'. The jonin had thanked him, pocketed it and left. Now the fun begins.
After a few hours of concentrating his chakra Naruto did not seem to be making any progress.
"Come on, come on, come on, come ON!"
And after a few people noticing and commenting loudly "Has that kid got constipation or something."
"Yeah looks like it, leave it to Naruto to suddenly need it and can't do it, all the while not being able to move because it hurts too much" a boy laughed.
Naruto looked up furiously at the two boys about a year older than him. "Shuddup! That only happened once!"
"Yeah whatever loser" The boys laughed at him again before finding someone else to pick on. The minutes slipped by and Naruto grew angrier with each passing second, The Uzumaki sign necklace he wore around his neck was starting to irritate his skin, so he unclipped it and slipped it inside his pocket.
"I'll show them, I'll show them all what I great ninja I can be!" he yelled into the sky. Suddenly once more unknown to him, his features changed. His nails grew longer, the shape to that of claws, his hair grew even spikier, if that were possible, short fangs erupted from his incisors and his eyes once more transformed to that of the dreaded nine tailed demon fox.
Slowly from Naruto's visions the world began to oddly stretch and reflex in front of him, he felt himself stretching too, and he was rushing straight for a back nothingness filled of rings of colour.
And then...he was gone.
Naruto felt as if he was caught in a massive sea storm where he could only catch glimpse of a few landscapes most of which were trees, all the while struggling against a non existing current, wave over wave crashing over him leaving him in tremendous pain, he didn't know what was up or down left or right, everything was spinning out of control.
The boy tried desperately to get a hold onto anything, his hands reaching out grasping thing air until he found something, almost like string, he pulled at it and found himself staring up at a crack in the dark abyss. But it felt wrong all wrong, like it was too soon, yet Naruto was scared and alone and this was his only chance at freedom from this horrible pain, he was running out of oxygen too.
He reached out a hand as he was nearing the crack and slipped it inside. Light Instantly appeared shinning from the gradually growing hole he was making. His hand on the other side latched onto something. A branch? Naruto thought while holding it firmly, and with one last final heave he pulled himself into a new world.
The moment Naruto entered this new dimension he threw up and let go of branch before realizing too late that he was at least 4 meters high. A thud echoed where he hit the ground and the boy groaned loudly. He was in a slumped over position with his rump sticking in the air. How humiliating.
Birds whistling in the trees made Naruto tried to cover his ears. Well at least they stopped him from going into an unconscious state. He slowly pushed himself up used his arms. Muscles ached and a large headache was beginning to form. Wobbling side to side on his first few steps would let anyone mistake him for a child who had fallen into a barrel full of sake.
And he could tell why. This place was still not right. On the corners of his vision areas still stretched and relaxed and there was a dizziness essence to it. The boy leaned against a tree to catch his breath. "In out, in out. Easy does it Naruto." He was hyperventilating.
Naruto glanced around his surroundings. He was in unfamiliar territory. Trees sprouted up all around him. "So I guess I'm in a forest?" You guessed right Naruto. Well done, you earn a sticker.
However he was clever enough to know that this type of tree only grew in the land of fire, so he must be close to home. Wait! Naruto thought. The jutsu! Did it work?
"That must explain where I am n-!" Naruto was cut off as a something large slammed into him. He fell to1 the ground twisting his ankle. "What the hell!?" he yelled.
"Gah! I'm so sorry please forgive me, I wasn't looking!" Naruto looked up to see a beautiful woman with light brown braided hair, golden-brown eyes and strange dotted black markings under each eye.
But what made Naruto shudder was that she was soaked through with blood. It was dripping down her face and she had several large gash wounds along her arms legs (partially covered by a long ragged cloth that had a slit on one side). Not to mention the worrying cut on her forehead. With just this one look Naruto could tell she didn't have long left before either exhaustion or blood loss took her life.
The moment woman caught side of Naruto's top (the one with the leaf symbol on it) she gasped.
"You're a leaf ninja! Please take my child and this to the fourth Hokage!" She was on the verge of tears with desperation in her voice as she shoved a scroll in Naruto's pocket and handed him a large bundle he had failed to spot earlier. All he could do was sit there, shocked.
"Hang on I- the fourth hokage? He's dea-" Once again he was cut-off
"There's no time to waste, there are ninja after us, I can hold them off with my husband for a little while, but not for long. Please keep my child safe, hurry!" She began drastically helping Naruto to his feet and pushed him off in the direction he supposed was the leaf village
Naruto could do nothing else but obey the woman's orders, his head was whirling but once he got home, surely everything will be explained. Right? No pain was felt from his earlier twisted ankle, but Naruto did not stop to contemplate as to why that was.
"Man, I'm going to be in so much trouble when I get back"
It started to rain and Naruto could feel the consequences of an empty stomach. Also he was worryingly weak from the journey, and he knew that if he didn't find shelter soon he would collapse, keeping in mind that he would fall on the bundle in his arms.
As he continued clumsily forward he could help but think back to strange woman and her words. Why does she think the fourth Hokage's alive? The boy wondered. While he was thinking of possible reasons his gaze wondered over a den-like structure made of rock. Naruto immediately began to pick up the pace, ignoring the pain in his head and abdomen.
Sturdy and hard, the den made an excellent shelter and was more than big enough for the both of them. Naruto sat down against the back wall of the small cavern and something crunched underneath his bottom. Sticking his hands in his back pocket he produced some biscuits. Smiling with glee Naruto opened them and within a matter of seconds all that remained were the wrappers.
With time on his side he spent it to investigate the bundle of clothing in his lap. The movements had caught his attention and he peeled back a loose flap of cloth to uncover a small angelic face. Big forest green intelligent eyes started up at him in wonder and fascination. Naruto was shocked to notice that the baby had four small rectangular-like dots along the bottom of each eye.
Memories flooded back into his mind when he remembered that the woman who gave him the kid had also the same markings, but more circular. Naruto did not want to check if it was a boy or a girl, he's had enough shockers for one day.
But those green eyes held his gaze. It was like a jungle in there, so many different hues and distinct shapes, Naruto swore that if he looked close enough he could see leaves falling and trees growing tall, and the wind rustling the grass, a whole world in the eyes of a child.
And the view started to change slight as he continued searching her irises, as if he was travelling through the jungle, but every single colour was green. Naruto broke the gaze with jumbled thoughts and shook his head.
Then the kid smiled and gurgled.
"Hey, what's so funny?" Naruto plastered a large grin on his face and spoke softly.
The baby gurgled once more and eyes pinpointed something on the ground beside them. Naruto's silver necklace must have fallen out of his pocket when he took out the food. As well as the scroll.
Naruto stared at the scroll then lifted the necklace. The child's eyes seemed to follow the necklace like a cat's follows a laser light. Naruto seeing a bit of fun, rose his arm and moved it from left to right, the shiny necklace dangling from his fingers, laughing when forest green eyes did the same.
"Why don't you hold onto to it, just until we get to Konoha, it's very precious to me. See," Naruto pointed at the silver pendent dangling from the necklace. "It's in the shape of the Uzumaki clan symbol. It's very important, the last link I have with my parents." Naruto looked down sadly. The symbol was attached to a delicate, but strong silver chain and it looked like this ~(link - badges-assets/978/2516904_ )
The six-year old placed the necklace around the child's neck, and it squealed in glee, a bit smile lighting up it's face. The Uzumaki kid was confused. The baby was a too young to be this intelligent, and able to recognize objects, but he dismissed it.
He cast a sideways glance at the scroll. Should i? or shouldn't i? As a future hokage of the leaf village I should make sure it is not a trap and read it! But what if it's scary?
Curiosity getting the better of him, he grabbed it and took a deep breath. Keeping one eye closed and the other squinted he proceeded to pull back the corner of the scroll, unravelling a few inches:
'Fourth Hokage-'
Snapped it shut and kicked it away to the other side of the cavern. Something was wrong. He could feel it. He was outside the village for sure. But then where is the kunai? Naruto Thought. Maybe that woman thought the fourth was still alive, or made a spelling mistake, I make spelling and spoken mistakes all the time, it makes all the difference. I mean I once got mixed up with whore and horse. You do not want to get those mixed up, trust me.
Naruto noticed that something had fallen out of the scroll when he had kicked it away. He picked it up and discovered a leather necklace with a small wooden symbol attached at the end. His eyes widened as he recognized the symbol. It was exactly like the Uzumaki, but backwards and in the middle of the swirl it had a small round dot. (this is what the leather necklace would look like, ignore the pendent in the photo. : upload/20110428/bullet_pendant_leather_
While he was staring at it, the child shuffled in his lap.
"Whoa, watch it!" he exclaimed as he steadied the bundle. He began imagining walking into the Hokage's office "Yeah sorry Old man, but I was given a baby in the forest to give to you, not to mention I'm not even allowed out of Konoha, but anyways and I sat down in the middle of nowhere, it's quite funny really, and the baby just fell off my lap and is now unconscious, how about that?" Imaginary Naruto scratched the back of his head with a grin on his face.
Yeah that would not sit well with Sarutobi.
The six year old decided to put the necklace back in the scroll and tuck them into the baby's cloth. That way they wouldn't get separated and he wouldn't forget any of them.
"See I can be smart if I wanna be, ya know!" he raised his clenched fist and smiled while talking to, I presume the baby.
"huh?wassat?"The scene in front of him began to stretch again. Relaxing came next and it repeated the process over and over.
"AARRRGH!"Yelled Naruto as he clutched at his head, then the bundle. "Not again! No-wait I have to-"
Crying erupted from the baby as Naruto was pulled out of existence.
This time was much worse. Excruciating pain erupted from the boys belly as he felt like he was being ripped apart, the only thing holding him together was invisible strings. He gasped for air when he could find none, and he swore he left part of his(awesome) hair behind somewhere...wait no it was all there. phew!
Only Naruto would be worried about his hair at times like this, hang on, I can think of another.
Sasuke.
However unlike last time where Naruto had interrupted the jutsu by grabbing onto something, the blackness seemed to spit him out into the world. But Naruto couldn't care less. After all he was beginning the descent into unconscious and will be out in three...two...one.
"What the H-!" Kakashi fell, face first into something small, squidgy and brown on the ground.
Asuma turned his head and smiled in amusement.
"That'll teach you to clean up after your dogs, Kakashi."
Then he noticed the six year old child that was lying across the jonins back. Still. Not breathing.
"Crap."
How ironic.
"You were lucky, Naruto."
White walls. A clean smell, and an old man dressed in white robes sitting at the foot of his bed. ah...did I eat too much ramen again? Naruto thought once he blinked open his eyes. They flickered to the left when someone he didn't recognize walked through the door.
"Ah Tsunade, I was just telling our mascot here that he was lucky to be alive, thanks to you of course." The Third Hokage smiled up at his former student. Tsunade returned the smile but turning her face to Naruto.
The Six year old almost leapt out of the bed in fear.
The legendary sannin's eyes raged with anger and her mouth was drawn back in a snarl. Her fore head was creased, making her eyes even narrower, while her stance presumed she was going to hit something. Any second.
"What the hell were you thinking, you stupid brat! You could have gotten yourself killed, you know if i hadn't have been in fire country, we wouldn't be having this conversation and you would be six feet underground!" Her hair whipped around her face as she quenched her anger.
"I-uh I..."
Naruto struggled for words. "I need to pee!" he shouted as he ran, though still in pain, mind, out of the room and down the hall, anywhere just to get away from her and those fists of hers. Though he seemed to be pretty proud of himself to come up with such an amazing excuse.
That was until he felt something yank him back by the collar of his top. "Oh no you don't" stated the Hokage calmly. "We need to have a little chat Naruto, especially now that is seems your well enough."
Naruto looked into the thirds eyes and saw what he was really seeing. I'm going to skin you alive, you little shit! The kyuubi holder gulped.
A couple of hours later, Naruto was sitting in a wooden chair facing the large desk in the thirds office, twiddling his thumbs and smiling nervously.
"Naruto, you have, I think, successfully performed an S-rank jutsu. Now, by doing so you have broken at least 3 rules. "
"WHAT?! S-RANK!" Naruto pulled a shocked expression before jumping up in the air in glee, that is until he caught Sarutobi's glare and immediately sat down again.
"Rule 1. You snuck into my home and went through my belongings."
"Yeah about that old man, you should hide things better."
"What do you mean, Naruto?"
"Well there was this orange book under the bed-"
"You mean this?" The Hokage said as he lifted up the exact same book that was on the desk.
"Argh!" Yelled Naruto as he tried to get away from him as far as possible. "Keep that away from me, why do you have it anyway!"
"…This is our little secret okay Naruto, this here…is a book with information on..er the enemy, yes that's it!" Sarutobi sweat dropped. "Anyway, enough of that, secondly you tried to perform a forbidden jutsu, and thirdly, you went outside the village. Now I want you to tell me exactly what happened from when you stole the scroll, to this morning." He instructed.
HELL YEAH! I SHARE A COOL SECRET WITH THE OLD MAN! Naruto thought while he pondered all the evens that had been leading up to this one.
"Well, I placed a seal on a kunai I think. Then I gave it to a weird jonin, then I tried to make it worked, and people kept saying I had constipation-
"Naruto." Sarutobi's warning. "Just the basics."
"Right, sorry. Anyway I felt a sudden burst of strength, or something ya know? Then it felt like I was being swallowed by a massive black swirly tunnel thing. It was really painful and I couldn't breathe. So I managed to grab hold of something and pull myself out."
"What was it?"
"a branch I think, then I hurt my ankle when I fell, and then this woman bumped into me, and I swear, she was dying, she had these cool markings under her eyes though. She told me to run while she stayed behind and gave me a baby to take to the fourth, but I think she meant you old man. Anyway I managed to hide in a cave, and found out that the baby had markings too!"Naruto exclaimed.
"Then what happened?" The third looked deep in thought. Worry etched all over his face.
"Then I put the scroll in the babys cloth, and the blackness swallowed me up again!." Naruto scratched his head. "I'm not sure what happened after that Just that I was spit out onto something soft."
"That would have been Kakashi." Sarutobi glanced to his left. "Tenzo."
"Sir." An ANBU appeared with a cat mask on. Naruto stared in awe.
"Bring me Kakashi. Now." The Hokage ordered with a wave of his hand. 'Tenzo' bowed before disappearing in a puff of smoke.
Awkward silence filled the void between Naruto and Hiruzen.
"So…."
"You can start by apologizing for breaking and entering." Hiruzen said calmly while they both waited for the Jonin to show up.
"Yeah but, the window was open, practically inviting in anyone, so really it's not my fault. In fact it's yours for leaving you place unlocked. Yeah! I was just..err...showing you how easy it is for a criminal to break- in if you just even leave the smallest of windows open. Being the protector of this city, you should be ashamed of yourself, Old man!" Naruto yelled as he grew more and more confident.
The Third gave Naruto and odd look. "You've been watching the 'How to get out of trouble' show again, haven't you Naruto? Because that is almost word for word one of their excuses on how to shift the blame onto someone else." The look of on Naruto's face confirmed his suspicions.
"How did you know?!"
"I have to watch the show myself, in order to catch brats like you when you copy their methods."
"That's one of them! Old man! You use them too, don't you? "
"I don't know what you're talking about."The Third crossed his arms and went into a huff.
Knock, knock, knock.
They both turned around as the hokage said "Come in." A tall Jonin with large bushy gray hair stepped into the room. His Eyes narrowed as he spotted Naruto.
"You wanted me, lord Hokage?" Kakashi asked. The Jonin had been spending 3 days (since Naruto has been unconscious for that long)in the shower, scrubbing his face until his skin was raw, devoid of any essence of dog waste.
"Yes. Do you have the kunai; this child here gave to you three days ago."
"Of course it's right here."Kakashi patted his weapons pouch before taking out a kunai and tossing it to the hokage who caught it in an instant.
"hmm…the brat wasn't lying it. Seems there's a faded seal on here, and from what you told me Kakashi, he managed to perform the flying thunder God Technique, however there was a large price, you were nearly torn in half Naruto, and like I said before, you shouldn't be here right now if it was for Tsunade." The hokage gave him another stern look.
The boy raised his hands in surrender. "It's not my fault, ya know. I didn't know it could do that!"
"It said exactly what could happen in the scroll."
"Oh. I must've missed it. Whoops, I guess?"
"Idiot." The hokage mumble as his slapped his palm against his face. "Anyway Kakashi, I think this involves you more than it seems, and someone else"
"Wait- you don't mean R-"
"Yes I do, Naruto you may leave now." Sarutobi motioned towards the door while Kakashi wandered casually over to the large desk to discuss matters with the old man.
"Hold it just one second! I'm a part of this too, ya know! Shouldn't I know what happened, you can't just leave me in the dark, ya know!" The six year old yelled pointing an accusing finger at Hiruzen.
"Oh alright then, but don't blame me if you don't understand it."
"I'm not that stupid, ya know." Naruto pulled a large grin facing both of them.
"B-but lord Hokage, won't this endanger… you know…" Kakashi trailed off, looking expectantly at the old man.
"Nonsense, he has a right to know, anyway, it's not as if I'm telling him who thingy is, am I?" The Hokage replied.
"Okay, whatever, let's just hope the brat doesn't grind you down anymore."
"Who are you calling a brat?! I'm nearly six years old, ya know!" Naruto fumed, angry eyes darting between Kakashi and his leader.
This kid is starting to give me a headache, Kakashi groaned inwardly. If he says ya know one more time…
Sarutobi cleared his throat.
"What you did Naruto somehow altered the past-No! I will not answer you questions now, only when I've finished! Anyway, first of all I'm going to tell you a long story, so please don't interupt."
At the mention of a long story, unknown to the hokage and Kakashi at the time, Naruto slipped his hand into his pocket, pulled out an object and flace them firmly on his face before starting his daily routine into sleep.
"Around six years ago…NARUTO! TAKE THOSE STUPID GLASSES OFF!" The Hokage yelled, spit erupting form his mouth.
Naruto launched into the air in fright. On his face was a pair of ordinary black glasses. However when Naruto took them off it showed that blue eyes had been painted on the lenses. Naruto filled with slight embarrassment handed them to Kakashi before reaching into his pocket again.
"So help me god if you have a another pair." Sarutobi growled. Naruto dropped his hand. Dammit! I'm going to have to use them another time, The six year old thought.
"Do you want to hear this story or not!" At Naruto's nod, the third continued.
"As I was Saying, Sometime around six years ago, in the forest outside our village, in the land of fire…
Anyway, this is my first fanfic, I know it's really slow and there doesn't really seem to be much more of a plot, but don't worry it's get more interesting in the next chapter and the chapters to come. This one is really boring compared to the rest of the story so please hang on and keep with it.
Also if you spot any spelling or punctuation mistakes, feel free to tell me, or any mistakes that I've made in the naruto world if you get what i mean, like for example, Kakashi is really a chunin(even though we know he's not).
Also if you really hated this story, please don't go on a big rant or something, maybe give me some hints to improve it so you hate it just a tiny bit less :)
Reviews are always welcome even if a bit critical, but not too critical, cause i will be very upset, as it is very hard for me to take criticism coz I'm a wimp :P
wow, i am in a really good mood today(hence the smileys!) :D
My apologies for the absolutely shit title, as the story progresses, if anyone wants to help me out tin that department, feel free, something funny would be good, cause i think we all know by now, I'm not good at that stuff.
Okami out.