New story. I had a thought and had to turn it into a story.
Ages/names - Max Ride -16, Angel Ride - 8, Jeff 'Iggy' Martinez - 16, Gordon 'Gazzy' Marks/Martinez - 10, Nick 'Fang' Hunter - 16, Monique 'Nudge' Eason/Hunter - 13, Ari Batulard - 9, Sam Smith - 16, Dylan Colt - 16, Craig Mitchel - 16, Rebekah 'Bex' Lawson -16, Lissa Venom - 16, Amy Call - 16, Hanna Crazz - 16, Ella Whitfield - 13, Nikki Ross -13, Robert Moon - 13, Daniel Ross - 13, Ron Turnbull - 13, Rose Rilly - 10, Kally Smith - 10, Owen Craig - 10, Mitchel Greene - 10, Graham Kime - 10, Simon Simonds - 9, Darren Craig - 8, Lee McDonald - 9, Harry Brodie - 8, Lilith Reid - 9, Ronnie Colt - 8, Sandy Thorn - 9 and Laeona Turnbull - 8.
Summary - Max and Angel Ride have been abused by their dad since they can remember. After their dad dies of alcohol poisoning they are adopted by Dr Valencia Martinez and her husband Jeb. Angel fits in better than Max and gets along better with their adopted brother Iggy and Gazzy. Gazzy had also been adopted. The second night of their stay Max does a runner and Fang (Iggy's next door neighbor and best friend) catches her. Max learns to fit in. She has good friends and great enemies. The best family ever and a great dog. Could her life get better. One day her's and Angels birth mum -Anne Walker- comes to take them home. But will the Martinez and their new friends let them? And does Fang and Nudge have some secrets that they have to let the others know? Secrets that will help them find their beloved friends.
Disclaimer - I don't own the MR characters only some of their surnames.
Claimer - I do own the characters that i created and of course the plot.
Main Pairings - FAX! Niggy! Gangel!(It won't be weird in this story as Gaz and Ange are not related.) Lam!(Lissa + Sam) and Jalencia!
Prologue
Max pov.
There is more to people on the inside than there is on the outside.
People automatically dislike you if you are fat, scared, feeble, spotty, bruised, ill looking and mute. I guess that's why I'm doing this. You will no doubt be the same. Dislike someone by looks. You see them and automatically dislike them, not getting to know the real them. This has happened to me and my sister. It doesn't help your self esteem. But we found a good life. And it was all good. And I guess I have to thank Ter for that. Yeah he abused his children and was an alcoholic. But if he never did what he did and then died Angel and I would of never found a better life. So I guess good things do happen some times. Just before you loose hope good things can appear. It's a good thing we never lost hope, as they say. You loose hope nothing good will happen.
Please enjoy my story,
- Max Ride. xx
So what do you think?
Please review. First day of a story, normally I put up 1 or 2 chapters of a new story on the first day and then my little rule kicks in. I am starting to post this up on all my stories. I need five reviews for each chapter i post before i post up the next one. On the first day i need 5 reviews in total for all the chapters i've put up.