This is my first criminal minds story. I have another chapter ready but I would like to know what you think about it. Thanks for reading!
'The mind of a murderer.' The title of Jane Watson's book is on a big poster at the window of the book shop where she'll be talking about it. It was a rainy evening. Jane is on her way, her favorite song is playing on the radio in the car. Jane is a beautiful 30 year old woman, her long blond hair is in a braid hanging over her shoulder. She's wearing a red figure hugging dress with a black blazer. When she entered the bookshop, all the seats were taken. Everybody was listening very interested to Jane, when she was done everybody applauded. People who bought her book asked her to sign it. Even though she did this in many stores she still didn't get used to it.
When she was done she packed her stuff, 'You seem to know what you're talking about.' Jane turned around. 'I do.' she said. 'My name is Aaron Hotchner, I'm from the behavioral analysis unit FBI.' 'Nice to meet you sir, Jane Watson.' She said while they shook hands. 'I'm not just here to listen to your book, I've been following your career for the past years and i would like to offer you a job.' 'Don't get me wrong i feel honored that you ask me but why?' she asked. 'You're an excellent agent, you studied criminology and psychology, you know a lot about serial killers and your past ..' 'You know about my past?' 'Yes, I've read you're file and i believe that it's something that can help you in this job.' 'I don't know, i fear that it's going to make it hard for me. I need some time to think about it.' Jane said distracted. 'Here's my card, call me if you have an answer.' Jane took his card said goodbye and walked to her car. On her way home she kept thinking about Hotchner's offer.
'I'm home.' she yelled when she opened the door. 'Mommy!' Jane's 5 year old daughter Rose yelled when she ran into her mother's arms. 'Hi princes, how was the reading?' Her father John asked when he walked in the room. He walked with a cane. He gave her a hug to welcome his daughter. 'It went great. But there's a little girl still awake.' she said while she picked up Rose. 'She wanted to wait for her mom.' John said. 'I'm here now and you need do go to your bed it's school tomorrow missy.' Rose smiled 'Okay but will you tell me a story?' 'Of course I will.' Jane carried Rose upstairs and placed her in her bed. She told a story about a princes and dragons until Rose fell asleep. She gave her a kiss on her forehead and tucked her in.
'Is she sleeping?' Jane's father asked when she entered the living room. 'Yes, she is. Can I talk to you for a moment.' 'Yes, sure.' John said while he took a sip of his glass of wine. 'I've had a job offer from the behavioral analysis unit today.' 'Did you accept? ' ' No I don't know if i'm though enough for it.' 'Hunny, you're the strongest person I've ever met. You've been trough so much.' 'But I'll have to travel a lot so what about Rose?' ' I can take care of her. Change would be good for you.'
Aaron Hotchner was at the bureau early the next morning to finish some paperwork. He looked at his cellphone and wondered if Jane would call him. She would be good for the bureau he thought. 'Hi Hotch, we have a case.' Agent Jennifer Jareau walked into the office. 'Okay, get the team together, I'll be there in 10, I'm going to finish those papers.
A few minutes later he heard someone knocking on the door. 'Come in.' 'Hey agent Hotchner, do you have a minute?' 'Of course agent Watson. Please take a seat.' Jane sat down on the chair before the desk. 'I think I wanna give it a try, to see if i'm good at this.' 'Okay, we have a case, you can come with us.'