Hello ! I began to write some stuff and that is one of it. As you probably noticed it I am not a native speaker. I am French so I apologize in advance for the stupid mistakes you will read or had read. I just wanted to write in English so I did it :D I did not want to make a mess of your beautiful language. And feel free to correct me :)
It would be glad if you can let me know your feelings about the story and my writing. I really need it even if it is very short :) But I am going to publish an other story in English which would be ... hotter :D
This is my first story in English so be kind with me please :D
Enjoy !
Sweat was beading on his forehead. His vision was blurred. The lack of oxygen started to be felt. The street lamps brought the little light into the room already dark.
He couldn't take it anymore. His hands even started to tremble. How did he get into this situation ? He didn't have the slightest idea. Well: a coquettish smile, a well-placed kiss, wandering hands and a look which said a lot about the course of the events. And that was it. Everything happened so fast …
He took a deep breath and tackled the task that was entrusted to him. It was untenable. He winced and took the products he would need to clean the disaster, breathing in and out of his mouth more and more faster.
For more safety, he caught a clothes peg which lied around next to him to plug his nose.
"Oh, Greg, you are unbelivable ! It is just a diaper for God's sake !" Exclaimed Cuddy entering into her little girl room and seeing her boyfriend still in front of the changing table for more than ten minutes.
"It's easy to say when you have your nose inside ! How a three-year-old kid can make a thing like that ?" She heard him moan from the corridor as she came back into the kitchen, with a Donald Duck voice. "And by herself moreover ! Honestly ..."
Living with Gregory House was not always all peace and quiet, she thought mixing her salad.