Ok so I watched Dear John last night and all the way through it I kept thinking of Edmund and Lucy and thus this was created. It's an AU because personally incest with the pevensie's to me is creepy but I do enjoy reading AU fan fictions they are some really good ones and the story is set the same time Dear John is . Oh I would also like to point out I do not own Chronical's of Narnia they belong to the wonderful C.S Lewis and nor do I own Dear John but I did use the theme for this story I hope you enjoy this P.S my other story sadly I have no inspiration but if anyone's dose please comment. Now on to the story the first chapter is in Edmunds point of view then hopefully if I get

You want to know the first thing that popped into my head when I got shot before everything went black. Coins, I was 8 years old again listening to a man talk about how coins are made, how they are punched out of sheet metal how their rimmed and bevelled, how they are stamped and cleaned, and how each and every coin is personally examined, just in case any have slipped through with the slightest imperfection, thats what popped into my head I am a coin in the United States Army, I've been punched through sheet metal, I've been stamped and cleaned my edges have been rimmed and bevelled. But now I have two small holes in me I'm no longer in perfect condition so there's something else's I want to tell you right before everything went black you wanna know the last thing that popped into my mind? You

Rewind years before

I walked along the small path way that weaved its way through the sand banks the sun blazed down on my dark mop of hair making the heat pass through my body like a ripple effect I mentally curse myself for wearing my hoodie at least I had some sense and wore bored shorts. The hot sand crumbled under my feet with each step I took, the salty sea breeze whipped my face instantly I looked down the beach of multiple family's relaxing in the sun all too busy to take a second look at an lonely tall dark haired late-teen if you hadn't realised yet I'm not too popular around here I know big shock but the reason for my unpopularity three months ago I got into a fight in a local restaurant probably not one of my finest act's but what's the point of living in the past. As I was strolling along the beach minding my own business a group of teenager properly a year or two younger then myself walked right passed me. If I had been walking one step quicker I would have ran right into them I watched for a second as they walked on by but then something made me stop a noise the most beautiful noise glancing back over my shoulder I looked back at the group and really looked at them two guys and two girls they must have been here for the summer I looked them over nothing really special until I heard that noise again. Laughter the sweetest laugh I have heard and it was coming from one of the girls. The first thing I noticed was that she was short but then again people have said I make them feel like small woodland creatures I then saw that she was wearing a simple jean shorts and a yellow tank top she had a brown handbag on her shoulder, her hair a reddish brown was down and blowing in the breeze and then I was staring into the most bluest eyes I had ever seen then it occurred to me I was staring at her, slowly I tore my eyes away and shoved my hands in my pockets and walked at a faster pace down the beach.

A little while later I was staring at the blue ocean listening to the waves gently lap at the wooden poles keeping the pier from falling into the water I closed my eyes and let the calming sound on the waves and the wind relax me. Then I heard her laughter again looking out of the corner of my eye I saw them again leaning only a few feet away from me the girl I was staring at before placed her bag on the railings then turned to me and smiled, I looked away staring back at the see I heard her voice it held traces of her laughter in it then it turned to anguish as a loud splash sounded. At first I thought someone had fallen into the sea but as I looked I saw that they wear looking over the girl looked upset I heard a few words such as 'bag' and 'my whole life' one of the boys clearly wanting to be the hero ran past me shouting they would get it. Rolling my eyes I yanked off my hoodie leaving me in my white tank top and red shorts kicking off my flip flops I climbed up on the railings and jumped in without a second thought.

The salt water stung my eyes as I pushed through after the bag feeling around in the sand the burning in my lungs increased then I felt the soft leather brush my finger tips, getting a firm grip I pushed off the bottom of the ocean and seconds later I rewarded my lugs with the sweet tasting air. I swam back to shore just in time for the boy who had ran off being a hero reached the water he tried taking the bag off me but I pushed past him to the girl who had the blue eyes

"Thank you so much" she cried running towards me, I handed her back the now soaking bag

"It's no problem" I mumbled

"It's a mess" she laughed softly I smiled she held out her hand for me to shake

"I'm Lucy Valiant" I almost raised my eye brow at her but fighting the feeling I shook her hand her small one fitted perfectly in my large one

"Edmund Pevensie" I nodded she grinned up at me, wow she really is short I dropped my hand and put them in my pockets

"Well thank you Edmund really my whole life is in this bag" I looked down at it, wondering why her whole life matter on one bag

"Really it's no problem, it was nice meeting you Lucy" I turned up the corner of my mouth and walked away back to retrieve my hoodie and shoes back on the pier

"Hey Edmund wait up" I turned around to see the running figure of Lucy I waited for her to catch up, either I was a faster walker than I thought or she was a really slow runner.

"We are having a party tonight, I was wondering if well if you wanted to come?" She bit her lip and looked up at me through her long lashes. I thought about this if I went there would be a high risk of possibly meeting people who I had previously gotten into a fight all those months ago, I had my mind made up on telling Lucy that I was busy tonight but when I looked into those deep blue eyes I heard myself say

"Sure"

What was I getting myself into?

Good bad or ugly

You can let me know by clicking that little button called Review XD A litte short but hopefully as the story goes on the chapters will be longer

Also I wanted to say if anyone has already written a story like this I am sorry truly I didn't know, but if not Yay for being the first one also as this story goes on I am thinking about mabie putting up a trailer but alas I am not good at editing so if anyone is interested please don't be afraid to voice your ideas on the trailer or the story.

Pinkstone18 x