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chapter one
Sandstorm awoke to the sound of birds singing and sunlight was streaming into the warriors her warriors we're waking and getting ready for the day,some of them still had scars from the recent battle with bloodclan.
she walked out into the clearing and saw Graystripe sorting out the patrols and padded over to him.
"Have you seen Firestar?" , she asked him
He pointed his tail towards the highrock and she padded over just in time to see Firestar stumble out of his den.
"Good morning sandstorm", he greeted her.
"How are you this fine morning."
"im fine tha-oh"
"Whats the matter?" , Firestar asked urgently.
"I don't,oh, know", she gasped.
"please get Cinderpelt, Firestar, please", she pleaded.
"Wait here I'll be right back"
Just hurry up it hurts
Firestar runs away to Cinderpelts den.
Sandstorm eyes fluttered shut and she falls to the ground, barely breathing.