Hey guys its me again I recently had an idea and I do like undertale (not sure how many of you like undertale) but this has to do with a human thats not really a human but half human half wolf but hides her true form :P I'm not going to spoil it too much but here we go hope you all enjoy it, but try not to do too much criticism cuz i really hate that... (my grammar isn't that good either when writing i get it but like i said... very little criticism would be great thx... also it will be in first person point of view for a few characters as well (also in the beginning I will have to take parts of the beginning of the first 2 characters try not to mind it too much... the rest will be all me writing it)
Disclaimer: characters other then mine belong to Toby Fox. This one story idea I had is mine but more or less credit to Toby (i will put in the description so i don't have to write the disclaimer anymore XD) Also one more thing, my character is not a child she is more or less in her teens and without further adieu, enjoy!
Chapter 1
Ivy's POV
I've been walking for so long yet no idea as to how much further I need to go to get to the top of this mountain I glance behind myself to see the rising sun. Its warmth helped me along a bit. It gave me the bit of courage I needed to keep going. As I slowly managed to reach the top, I noticed a huge hole,A volcano? No... if it was then it would have went off at some point... The more I thought about it, the more curious I became, but before I could move away from the ledge, a piece of the ledge I was standing on crumbled away underneath my feet allowing me to plummet to what I thought would be my demise. The fall was short as I crash on top of a bed of yellow flowers. My back hurt quite a bit as well as my shoulder. I slowly sat up rubbing the top of my head and I could feel my red bandana was still there. I lightly sighed getting up whincing at my shoulder and glanced around.
"Howdy!" I blinked glancing around curiously not knowing where the voice came from, "Down here!" I lookes down to a single flower that stood out and raised an eyebrow.
"A talking flower?" it nods
"I'm Flowey! Flowey the flower! Welcome to the underground!" I tilt my head slightly, "Your new to the underground arnt'cha. Gollyy! Your probably just confused. Well your pal Flowey will help you!" I sit down in front of Flowey, "In the underground, there are many monsters who are trying to kill humans like yourself, but ol Flowey here is here to help you!" something flashing in front of me and I could se a floating gold heart in front of me. I tilt my head, "That is your soul. It is the culmination of your being. Wierd I've never seen a golden colored soul before. Anyways... Your soul starts out weak, but it can grow strong if you gain enough LV."
"L... V...? Whats that?" I looked at Flowey with a confused look. Flowey chuckles.
"Why it stands for LOVE of course! You want some LOVE don't you?" I blink.
"Um... sure?" I could see Flowey grin, but it was more of a feint smirk.
"Don't worry! I'll share some LOVE with you!" he winked and what looked to be some tiny white pellets shot out from him and floats right above him, "Alright. Down here LOVE is shared through... Little white... "friendliness pellets..." I narrowed my eyes when he said that, "You ready? Move around! Get as many as you can." I faintly growled and Flowey paused the pellets for a moment before sending the pellets towards me. I move slightly away to where all of the pellets missed me other then one. It in fact hit my soul. I winced. Flowey sneered, "You idiot. In this world... its kill or BE killed. Why would ANYONE pass up an opportunity like this!?" Flowey then surrounded me with a bunch of pellets, "No DIE." he started laughing historically as the pellets slowly surrounded me. I was in bit of a panic. as they were about to hit me when I felt something heal me and all the pellets vanished. Flowey and myself had a look of confusion until we both saw what looked to be a floating fire appear. It then hits flowey blasting him out of sight. I glance towards what shot Flowey and see what looked to be a goat standing on their hind legs and with normal, but furry hand.
"Oh my what a terrible creature torturing such an innocent youth." she sighed before looking to me with a smile. I relaxed a bit, "Hello there young one. I am Toriel. Caretaker of these RUINS. I mean you no harm like that flower. I pass through this place every day to see if any humans have fallen down. You are the first human to have fallen not long after another." I slowly nod.
"I'm Ivy..." I respond. She smiled.
"Its very nice to meet you my child. Now come. I will guide you through the catacombs." she smiled. i was being cautious, but I wasn't in the slightest scared at all. She had turned and begun to lead the way. As I followed I could see nothing, but the bit of darkness. It didn't take long until we were at the front of the ruins. It looks peaceful. The ground was purple the bricked pillars were purple and I could see a small pile a leaves a head with... what looked to be some kind of shinning... star? Toriel was a bit further up on the stone steps and I went towards the star. I tilt my head and press my hand onto the star. I slight wind hit me. I glanced around pulling my hand off not sure what had happened. I shrugged and head up the stairs after Toriel and into another room. In the room, I could see a set of sealed doors with some panels on the ground to the right. Toriel stops a bit ahead and turns towards me. I stop as well, "This is the RUINS. Allow me to educate you on how things operate." As soon as she had said that, she had stepped on four of the panels then flipped the leaver on the wall causing the doors to open. She walked back to me, "In the RUINS, there are many puzzles. Ancient fusions between diversions and door keys. One must solve them to move from room to room. Please adjust yourself to the sight of them." She then walks through the door with me following from behind. As we enter, I could see more of the purple RUINS, but this time with a wooden bridge with a stream of water running through it as well as some green vines nearby. I walk up to Toriel, "To make progress here, you will need to trigger several switches." she pauses.
"I need to figure out which ones they are and flip them right?" Toriel nods in response with a smile.
"Yes, but worry not, I have already labelled the ones that you need to flip." I frown slightly.
"But that takes the fun out of it..." I pout. Toriel chuckles.
"Its to keep you and any other human safe." She then walks off towards the other side of the room. I head towards the switch passing by the non labeled one. I then see the labeled one and flip it. I could hear the sound of the spikes lowering. I looked to Toriel, "Splendid! I am proud of you little one." I lightly sighed I wasn't little I was more like 18, but its not a big deal, "Let us move to the next room." I follow her to the next room. Once there, I could see a dummy at the end of the room and lightly tilt my head a bit before looking at Toriel, "As a human living in the underground, monsters may attack you. You will need to be prepared for this situation. Worry not though! The process is simple. When you encounter a monster, you will enter a FIGHT. While you are in a FIGHT, strike up a friendly conversation. Stall for time, I will come to resolve the conflict. Practice talking to the dummy." I looked at her dumbfounded and sighed once more.
'She honestly thinks I'm a child... sheesh... but I might as well do as I'm told for now...' I walk up to the dummy. I encounter it and once more I could see my golden colored soul. I glance to Toriel who has a look of confusion upon seeing it, but it quickly vanishes back to a smile. I look back to the dummy and try to speak with it, "Um... hello..." The dummy says nothing and I scratch the back of my head. At that, I could see a mercy Icon in front of me and pressed my hand down onto it. The battle ends and my soul disappears for the time being. Toriel smiles.
"Well done young one. The next room awaits us." She leads to the next room. I follow into another purple room and can see some pillars and more green vines, "There is another puzzle in this room. I wonder if you can solve it." I tilt my head again as she leads on and I just follow. Soon enough once we get to the narrow hallway, my soul shows up again and I could see a frog there that decided to attack. I blinked. I pressed on the Act Icon and tried to compliment it.
"U-um... you look... nice." The frog didn't seem to understand, but smiled a bit like it was flattered. Toriel showed up next to the frog which looked right at Toriel and hopped away. I stood there more confused if anything. Without a word, she kept walking with me still following. Eventually we reached a really long hallway and Toriel stopped in front of me again.
"You have done excellently thus far, my child. However I have a difficult request to ask of you. I would like you to walk to the end of the room by yourself. Forgive me for this." With that she rushes off to the other side of the room. I could actually see her hide behind a pillar at the very end of the room. I lightly shake my head and just make my way over there trying not to rush myself and once I get to the end of the room, she shows herself, "Greetings, my child. Do not worry. I did not leave you. I was merely behind this pillar the whole time. Thank you for trusting me. However, there was an important reason for this exercise... To test your independence." I shake my head.
"Ok um. I don't know if you know this, but I'm not a child... I'm like 18 years old and I can handle myself really..." she chuckled again.
"To me you are still considered a child. Anyways I must attend to some business, and you must stay alone for a while. Please remain here. Its dangerous to explore by yourself." I lightly snort as to say I wasn't going to, "Hmm... I have an idea. I will give you a cell phone. If you have a need for anything, just call. Be good. Alright?" I say nothing as she walks away. I lightly shake my head and watch her leave. I then leave myself and explore. I see each other puzzle in the ruins and see all the other monsters. I then find this ghost laying on the leaves and approach it. I tilt my head a bit.
"Um... hi there... are you ok?" the ghost keeps acting like I'm not there, "Do you think you could move please? I need to get through..." The ghost opened its eyes and got up looking at me, "Who are you?"
"Why... I'm Napstablook." he looked a bit sad. I didn't realize I was suddenly in a fight. So I Acted and game him a patient smile causing him to smile back a bit, "Heh..." he did attack with some acid tears, but I had to move aside from each one. I then decide to tell him a little joke.
"Um... why did the chicken cross the rode? To get to the other side." I face palmed at that joke. I was so bad at them anyways, but Napstablook laughed a bit.
"Let me try something..." he used his Acid tears and they flew upward and turned into a hat, "I call this "Dapperblook" do you like it...?" I smile and nod.
"Of course I do It looks good." he smiled back.
"Oh gee." My soul disappeared again and I looked to Napstablook, "I usually come to the ruins because there's nobody around... but today I met somebody nice... oh... I'm rambling again... I'll get out of your way." with that, he vanished. I keep on going and sometimes I get into fights with other monsters. They wouldn't hurt anyone so I would just plainly talk to them and spare them. I have no need to fight any of them anyways nor do I want to. I keep going until I reach a... house in the ruins? I'm not even sure. As soon as I'm about to head over, I could see Toriel with her phone out trying to call me, she had already noticed and rushed over to me.
"Oh my. How did you get here my child? Are you hurt?" I shake my head.
"No I'm fine... really..."
"No its not. I should not have left you alone for so long. It was irresponsible to try to surprise you like this... err... Well... I suppose I cannot hide it any longer. Come young one!" she quickly heads to her house and I follow from behind now just curious as to what surprise she was talking about.
well that's it everyone... its my first time trying to do and Undertale fanfic... like i said when I'm doing the start with Flowey and Toriel im just going off of the game for it till we get out of the ruins... anyways I do hope you all enjoyed it... if not I will try to make the next chapters as best as I can :l I played the game through neutral and genocide, but pacifist mode? I have yet to do and I was doing the story as a pacifist ." so yea... anyways R&R! (don't criticize me too much plz a little bit is ok and I will work on the comments you guys tell me to do thx :3 )
