Some Karma angst for you. Read into it what you will. I've had the idea for this poem for like three months, so it was written easily. I wrote this in Shakespearean sonnet form, but it isn't a true sonnet, so don't judge me. This is my first attempt at AGATB poetry, but I have been writing original poetry for ages. I own NOTHING!!!!! Review and leave concrit, please. It will help me greatly in my original poem writing.
YOU REMEMBERED
Brother's keeper, shadowed son of the night,
Your eyes have shined, glowing and observant.
Lips, lashes, lungs, starry eyes oh so bright!
Time spent, price paid for love's long endurance.
And a whisper breathes, "Remember."
I ache for your presence tonight with me.
But I know I cannot be where you are.
Ever since you left, only you I see,
Shining in the heavens, my northern star.
And your voice calls out, "Remember."
Society shunned the love that we shared.
Why couldn't they simply accept what we felt?
Seeing your brown on my white, they rudely stared.
But someday those colors will join, mix, and melt.
And softly you remind me, "Remember."
In the next life, we'll join our souls together.
And we'll laugh, love, and look to forever.
And you will smile and say, "You remembered."
Did you pick up on the 'you remembered'? It's from RA. Cute? No?