Summery: 7 year old Tukiko has finally had enough of the villagers of Konoha. She runs away after a severe beating and runs into a certain White Snake. Knowing who this young girl is, he takes her under his wing and trains her to be a killer and even adopts her. How will deal with this new threat looming over their heads? You better read if you want to know! READ.
Rating: M for blood, gore, language, strangeness, and maybe some other stuff if I can get some courage to write it…
'I hate this place…Hate it, hate it, hate it, HATE IT! Why won't they ever leave me alone?! And STOP thinking I'm the damn fox, because I'm fucking NOT you dickheads!' thought a little girl as she ran through the trees trying to get away from her pursuers who were not very far behind. It was nighttime, but a full moon was out so you see clearly. The girl dashed from some bushes into a small clearing where she tripped. The girl had silver straight hair that reached her shoulders and had bangs that reached just above her crimson eyes. The ends of her bangs hid half of her eyes so you could barely even see them which made some people wonder how she could even run, let alone walk without tripping. However, in the hair you could see some tangles and some dirt with a little bit of blood. Not much, but there was some. Her new dress that she had gotten today was now torn and also had bloody dirt on it. Before, it had been a lovely shade of blue with white doves on it, but now the doves were bloody and the blue now turned to an ugly shade of black/green. Only little bits and pieces of the previous colors remained. She was barefooted and had no socks on even, which made her feet torn from the rocks and twigs she has stepped on. And the only items she had was a beautiful necklace with an azure gem in the shape of a crescent moon and lined by sliver around her neck and a silver flute she was clutching in her hands. She growled out and quickly crawled into some bushes that provided a semi good hiding spot. She leaned back against a tree trunk and gasped as she fell back into it. Smirking, she scooted into the hollow and covered up the opening but still leaving a small space opened so she could see what was happening. She saw her pursuers(eight ANBU, ten genin, and about five villagers) rush into the clearing she was previously in. She smiled as they looked around confusingly but started to tremble when she saw one of the ANBU walk towards her hiding spot. Backing up as far as she could, the ANBU was about to look in the bushes when someone suddenly walked into the clearing with a girl by his side. Everyone started shaking, except Tukiko, when they saw the man and recognized him clearly. Tukiko, however, wasn't in the Honor's Class at the Academy so she didn't know as many things. It also didn't help that she had no books to read. She whimpered though when he killed all of her pursuers without a second thought and stalked to her little hideout.
'I'm dead…I'm dead, I'm dead, I'm dead, I'm dead, I'm dead, I'm dead, I-' the strange man took the bushes and parted them and saw her frightened figure, eyes wide with terror staring back at him. He held out a hand and said softly:
"It's ok, I won't harm you, little one." The girl stared at the man before hesitatingly accepting his hand. She shivered because his hand was cold as ice, even though it was in the middle of August.
"Who the hell are you?" she didn't mean to sound so rude but it was just a habit because many people liked to lie to her about how they want to befriend her before trying to kill her. To them it was all a game, Befriend the Demon before You Try To Kill Her. It got irritating after the 15th game. However, it didn't seem as if the man minded at all.
"Right to the point, aren't you Tukiko? Well, my name is Orochimaru to answer your question. And to answer your other unasked one, I'm not here to kill you. Instead, I want to adopt you. I know how these pathetic worms treat you and I want to take you away from all of this." He explained. Tukiko furrowed her eyebrows in confusion.
"How the hell do you know my name? And how did you know I was going to ask that question. Who is she, and what the fuck do you mean by adopting me? The last people who tried to adopt me also tried to kill me and make it look like an accident! But ol' Kyuu-chan messed em' up before they could kill me. Is that want you want? To kill me in my sleep?" Orochimaru stared at her, confused.
"Kyuu-chan?" he asked. 'Does she mean Kyuubi? Does she already know about him? And why in blazes is she calling him Kyuu-chan? Either is very brave, or very foolish…I might have my hands full with this one.' He then noticed the necklace and the flute. His eyes widened. However Tukiko didn't notice as she explained that 'Kyuu-chan' was none other than Kyuubi.
"Kyuu-chan has been the one to take care of me and became my very first friend, even before the old man…I don't ever see him anymore, though…Wait! Why am I telling you all of this? Next thing I know you'll be trying to kill me! And you never did answer my questions!" Orochimaru chuckled as she glared at him while also pointing.
"That over there is Anko-chan, who I have also adopted. I know your name because I used to live here and actually, you're quite famous. Or should I rather say, infamous. I could see it in your face you were going to ask, as you are very easy to read, and what I mean by adopting you is, I wish to take you away from here and train you as a ninja. Train you to be the strongest kunoichi in the world. Wouldn't you like that? Would you like to have your revenge on this village? What have they ever done to you to deserve you. You are the treasure of Konoha, a gem, although rough around the edges, you can become polished so that you are envied by everyone out there. Wouldn't you like that? Tukiko?" the girl thought about it. It would be nice but…something was bothering her. What would he get out of this?
"And what would you get out of this, Orochimaru?" the pale man just chuckled.
"Only happiness in seeing that you are finally being expected…" then he turned serious. "But, should you accept, you will swear allegiance to me and only me. You will obey my orders, and Anko's orders should I say so. You are to fight when I say so, and fight who I say so. If you accept but disobey any of my orders, I will kill you. I won't sugarcoat words to get you to trust me. You either do or you don't. However, if you don't accept these terms I will allow you to go back to Konoha, unscathed." Tukiko widened her eyes.
"You make it sound that if I agree I would become a servant, a dog, a-a pawn…" she glared at Orochimaru who just chuckled.
"Oh don't worry, you would be allowed some freedom, to travel the countries, the village, lay around, anything. But like I said, even if you were on a break but the village was in trouble, you would have to leave peace behind and enter the warzone. You would leave freedom behind if I order you to. Like I said, I'm being blunt about this. Choose carefully, Tukiko, for your decision will determine your life." 'Excellent, she's about to break. Just a little more coaxing and she'll be ours.'
"Oh come on kid, Orochimaru-sama isn't that bad of a guy once you get to know him. This is a fun side that you would miss if you were to go back to Konoha. And trust me kid, I've been there and that is one place that loves to lie." The purple haired girl named Anko scowled. Tukiko looked her over seeing as this was the first time she spoke through the whole thing. Her purple hair was spiked up in an unusual style, but at least her clothes were more normal. She had on a tan jacket on with a black tight shirt on underneath. She was wearing black pants that showed off her legs but looked to be comfortable still. She had on the regular shinobi sandals and also looked to be twelve. She had a crazy grin on and her purple eyes were curved into two n's. She looked trustworthy enough. She smiled at both of them and grabbed Orochimaru's hand, and then bowed.
"I accept your proposal, Orochimaru-sama." Her politeness shocked both of the two strangers but while one grinned, the other smirked.
"Thank you for choosing the right path, Tukiko-chan." Anko ran up to Tukiko and put one arm around her shoulders.
"I now have a younger sister! Hehehe! So, are you guys ready to get away from this dump they call a peaceful town?" Oro and Tukiko nodded and all three started to walk away from Konoha. Unfortunately it wouldn't be the last time any of them would see Konoha.
Hope that was good for a first chapter. I won't lie, I've written stories before, but they were mostly for my friends and ONLY my friends to read but then they all forced me to get an account and publish stories on here. They keep claiming I'm a good authoress but eh, I think I could do better work.
Flamers: I don't know if I'll get any these early and I've heard that people like to take criticism to a whole new level and I heard this was flaming so here's to you assholes: Anyone who flames me will be laughed at and I will delete your review/flame, what the fuck ever. I WILL print off review and share it with my friends to laugh at and then I will tear it into little bits of pieces! And I might even publish it on the next chapter so people will read it, name and everything.
Enough about that, I WILL take advice on how to refine this story into a better one. I will NOT take votes though, but maybe advise on the pairings. NO VOTES.
Thirdly, I write this story for my own amusement and don't care if other people read or not. I won't hurry up in writing chapters, or make them longer, and as for grammar: I DON'T GIVE A DAMN ABOUT THAT. The only thing I care about is misspellings of the Naruto names and whatnot. THAT'S IT. I MIGHT put up games some people like to do, like, What's the Buzzword or Play On words, whatever you wanna call it. Guess the Character where a dead character is actually alive and is using a alias whatever you call it.
Oh, if you hadn't noticed, Tukiko is a fem. Naruto. And Tukiko means Child of the Moon.