Hi this is my first story but please reply and tell me what I can do better.


Meeting after the holidays

Hermione is packing her bag to get ready to go to Kings Cross Station. While Harry was walking to the Station. Suddenly Hermione's phone beeps it was Ron saying " Hey Hermione see you at Kings Cross!"

Then Hermione replies " Hey Ron have you heard from Harry over the holiday cause I certainlyhaven't."

Then Hermione's mum says that they have to go now. Hermione was worried about Harry. Harry wiped a tear from his face, it had need 13 years since his mum and dad died. Then he sees Ron get out of his car and start to walk to platform 9 3/4. At this
point

Harry starts to run " Ron, RON!" Harry shouted as loud as he could and Mrs Weasley hears him. " Harry, are you ok dear."

" Yes I am fine I just need to talk to Ron, Mrs W."

Ron had already gone through the wall and waiting there was Ron and Hermione. Harry was so happy both of his friends were going to Hogwarts for their 3rd year. " Harry!" Shouted Hermione and she ran to give him a hug. " Hey Mione." Replies Harry in
/a happy voice. 5 minutes later,( while they have been chatting) he golden trio climbed the Hogwarts Express. When Ron finally found a free carriage, Hermione flipped her hair and Harry stared at her thinking " Wow I wish she was my girlfriend

she is so smart and so cute." Hermione touches Harry's shoulder and he wakes up. Steam starts to come out of the train and they are off. The golden trio are off to their 3rd year of school at Hogwarts school of Witchcraft andWizardry.