Authors Note:First reveiw
Disclaimer: Do not own any naruto Characters exept my own chars.
Chaper 1 Sutakane pov
Pain shot throughout me it was like y body was on was like living through hell because my sences where very acute.I was swimming in the darkest,blackest reache's of my mind ,but that could'nt help me with the pain. I snapped out of my black abyss and opened my eye's. It was almost pitch black around me. The only light that was shining in the room was from a tiny opening in the steel door that the people on the other side could look in to see what I was doing. I blinked my eye's so that I could get the feeling of sleepyness away. "It seems that you are awake."A raspy male voice said from the other side of the door. I wanted to tell him to fuck off but, a searing wave of pain whent throughout my jaw so that I was'nt able to.
I could hear him tell someone behind him to go get some food. I heared him take out the keys to the gangled while he was trying to find th right one to open the jangling are very annoying for vampire hearing.
This does so totally not help with this now very annoying pounding headache.I opened the door. A pale yellow light flouded in. I could finally see what the rest of the room looked was dried blood on the floor in spots along with a thin layer of dust on the floor. It seemed that I was laying on a cot that was secured to the wall by man walked in and closed the door behind him. It made a metalic click as it closed. Now instead of that stupid little light that was from the other side of the door. There was actually light that came from a light knew that there where frickin lights in on with the story and not my rammbling.
Oh, great evil snake lord.I thought. Inwardly I am screaming like a fangirl. You could try to keep your thoughts to yourself.I heard someone else say in my head.I bolted upright at hearing him in my was suddenly a low growl from the right corner of the room.Why's he near you.I heard Kohote think to me. Kohote stop being so protective. I can take care of myself.I thought to her.
Then not being able to prove my point I sudenly blacked out. It is very annoying when that happens.
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That was the end of chapter one. The other chapters my be screwed up so do'nt read those and I will fix the other chapters.
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