This is my first fanfiction so please be nice.
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It was a normal, average day in smurf village, clear blue skies, everyone doing their chorse and Papa smurf working in his lab, nothing could go wrong. Thats what they thought. Brainy was, as usual, smurfing his advice to all the smurfs of the village until "PAPA SMURF"
"That will teach yeh a lesson, lad" the scottish accent smurf, Gutsy yelled as he he smurfed Brainy across the village from one side to the other. Hefty and Grouchy couldn't help but snicker as Brainy flew through the air and landed with a thud! on the ground.
"Ow, all I was trying to do was help, but I still get smurfed across or out of the village, it's not fair" Brainy moaned a loud to himself "i'm gonna take a walk for a bit maybe then they'll relise how much they hurt me" so off Brainy went for a walk in the forest, little did he know that Gutsy, Grouchy and Hefty were slowly following behind.
"Where does he think he's going?" Hefty asked the other two
"I don't know" Grouchy replied "I hate not knowing"
"You hate eerything Grouchy it's who you are" Hefty said
"Lets just follow the lad to make sure he doesn't smurf himself into trouble" Gutsy jumped in.
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Back at smurf village, the accident-prone smurf clumsy was looking for his best friend Brainy but couldn't seem to find him anywhere.
"Papa smurf, Papa smurf" Clumsy called while banging on the door, a couple of seconde later and the door open revealing an older looking smurf.
"What is it Clumsy?, Is there something wrong" Papa smurf sked the accident-prone smur.
"I can't find Brainy anywhere and I havent smurfed Gutsy, Grouchy or Hefty either I thnk somethings wrong" Clumsy explained.
"I'm sure there somewhere smurf around again and you still can't smurf them come back"
"okay, Papa smurf"
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Back in the forest Gutsy, Grouchy and Hefty seemed to have lost Brainy.
"Where has he gone to now" hefty asked
The next thing they heared was a blood-curdling scream.
"BRAINY" they all said at the same time.
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further on in the forest brainy had his back right up against the tree with a poisonous snake ready to attack, It moved right back and Brainy closed his bracing for impact and the snake strike at Brainy making him let out a blood-curdling sceam.
The next thing Brainy new was the snake gone and three blue blurs kneeling next to him "we need to get him to Papa smurf fats he loosing to much blood, Hefty, you carry him Grouchy you stay with him and i'll run on ahead to tell Papa, Good luck lads" Gutsy ordered before getting up and running off. The lats thing Brainy remembered was being picked up by strong arms then it all went black.
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so what do you think please review it will be greatly appreciated.