Hi! Its me. :)

I just wanted to say before I started this story that I will most likely need help and would love, as this story goes on, that you guys are here with me
to give me advice and information on what you enjoy reading in stories and how I can make mine better.

-What deters you from my story?

-What you like about my story?

I love the usual reviews, but adding a little more than 'UPDATE' would go a long way. Reviews also make me want to write for you guys who like the story and make me write faster. Also, thoughs of you would will just read the story and just leave without reviewing, I love how you're interested but even an anonymous quick review is greatly appreciated. I stress greatly.

I want to know what interests you people in these stories, cause Im obviously not grasping the alluring concept of them after my many failed attempts at writing and I wanted to write a story people would enjoy more.

::People/Readers/Writers::

If you have any ideas or any comments on what you DO and DO NOT like about this or any of my stories I would appreciate that you tell me.
I can take critisim. Constructive critisim.

ANYTHING you guys can think of to help my writing would be sooo awsome.

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Any suggestions?

Call 1-800-REVIEW
Just kidding...I've always wanted an ad thingy like on TV and stuff. (.);;

Okay, well, please review or e-mail or whatever you can think of to get any information to me that might help.

(P.S.: DO NOT call that number.)
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Domo Arigato!
Thank-YOU!