Hey everyone. This is my first fanfic, but I've written many personal ones, that no one has read except for me and I've been reading fan fiction for a long time. Constructive criticism and any sort of comment is much appreciated!

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James sat in the seat across from me and strumming his fingers against the cushion next to him, it was making an awful slapping sound. I was sitting here trying to write song lyrics for my parents… I promised them a video of my new song when I came back for Christmas break, but James was distracting me. I finally lost my patience and snapped.

"Stop it Potter!" James looked up straight into my eyes, like he could see right to my soul.

"Why is this bothering you? If you came and sat here, I'd stop you know." James replied with a smile. Why oh WHY did Maria's brother have to be James, why him? Maria, my best friend, is always followed everywhere by her twin, James. I looked over at Maria for help but she was dead asleep.

"Please" I asked him, "Just stop" James smiled and shook his head no. I let out a cry of annoyance. See, this is what I hate about him, he turns something so simple into something so annoying, he knows just how to push my buttons. I looked down at the blank paper in my notebook, what in the world am I going to write about. This was the first time my mind really went blank when I was trying to write a song. I let out a miserable sigh and tore the blank paper out of my note book, sure it was a waste of paper, but annoyed people don't think straight.

I crumpled up the paper and threw it at James, but he swatted it away before it got close to touching him. I stared at the seat next to James and then at my paper.

I really love James, but I won't admit it, he's just after me for the challenge, once I let my guard drop he'll swoop in and break my heart. It's easier to pretend to hate, even though I do hate certain traits about him.

"Lily." James said stroking the leather chair seat next to him, "Come sit with me." I shook my head and brought my quill to my paper.

I don't think that empty train seat

Has ever looked this good to me.

I wrote those 2 lines before snapping my notebook shut and sticking it in the luggage compartment above my seat. James, I'm writing about James. I sighed and tried to sneak a look at James, but his eyes bored into mine, was he looking at me this whole time?

"What're you writing Evans, your face is all red, did you write about me." James pestered.

"No, I did not right about you Potter, stop assuming everything revolves around you 'cuz when you ASSume you make an ASS out of you and me." Yes, I Lily Ann Evans just said that…

I got that from my grandpa… my GRANDPA, and I juts used it on James Potter. James snorted and kept looking straight at me, wasn't he even embarrassed? Even a little bit? But his eyes said no, they looked straight through my soul. I swear that guy can see through everything. I swear everything.

"Potter what colour underwear am I wearing?" I asked to test him. He blushed, not when I said underwear but when I said colour. He shrugged and finally looked away. I dunno what I just did to him but it worked!


"Hey, Lils." James said finally breaking the hours long silence. I looked up at him.

"Hmm?" I asked, wait… I'm being too nice. "What do you want Potter and don't call me Lils."

"Well LILS, we're almost there so you should but on your uniform." I pulled down my suitcase from the luggage compartment and took out my robe and tie. I wore a pair of grey pin striped shorts and white button down tank top with a collar. I wore it so I'd be dressed appropriately for the weather and be able to quickly change into a Hogwarts approved uniform. I fastened my maroon and gold tie and pulled my black robe over both. Okay, I'm ready. Hogwarts 7th and final year… here I come.


So, what do you think? Do I have a strong story going? Are you interested? Please REVIEW and tell me! I know it's pretty short, but this is just an introduction. Next chapter will be posted when I have 2 reviews, like the second I get online, I'll post the next chapter… if I have 2 reviews.