I was inspired by another story into writing this. It's really simple and short. This is only a story for practice - ONLY FOR PRACTICE. IF IT SUCKS, SAY IT. I wanted to see how a type of second person thing would turn out, so yeah. Each chapter consists of someone's POV. Tell me if ya like.
WARNING: READING THIS STORY WILL PROBABLY DROWN YOU IN CLICHENESS. (Again, for practice for this type of writing, so... yeah.)
Idle Solicitude
When you don't have any parents and are surrounded by demons everywhere, stick with the strongest.
If he looks at you with icy amber eyes, smile to see if his facial expression will change.
When around a green toad, make sure to make him miserable – you'll get a good laugh.
When feeling upset, pout until Jaken asks you what's wrong,
Then point out that he cares.
When he starts squawking about how he doesn't and thinks you're a stupid girl,
Yell at him to shut up or your ears will start bleeding from his voice.
When you stare at his fluffy tail, try to restrain yourself from stroking it. (which probably has to be the hardest task mankind has ever had.)
When you feel like calling him father, remember that he has no feelings.
But he has a big heart.
When he actually gets injured, don't mention anything about it and act like he didn't have a freakin huge gash on his chest.
When she comes and finds him on the ground, watch the scene from out of view.
When he watches her as she bandages him, smile and tell Jaken something about the lord and the miko falling in love.
When you see him sneaking out at night to see a certain girl, smile and day dream of having the miko and demon as your parents.
When you catch him kissing her, giggle and make an embarrassing remark.
When she starts to blush, leave them to privacy because you'll know he'll start kissing her again.
If you see her around the group, ask her if she'll give him a sibling.
When she brings her son to the group, ask her if he will be your new brother.
When the demon's brother is nearby, attempt to keep him away from the miko, because you know that he will try to get her back.
When happy, go pick flowers and decide which one would look better in Lord Sesshomaru's hair. And then compare it to Kagome's hair, which seemed to go well with the lord's.
When Shippo says gold would look nice on Kagome, add a comment about Sesshomaru.
When she plays a game, always suggest pin the knife on the Jaken.
When Jaken makes on insult about her, watch as the lord defends her and Jaken screams.
Wimpy Jaken.
When she picks flowers with you, ask her if she wants to be your new mother.
When she smiles and says yes, squeal it out to the lord.
When she finally says I love you, smile as he says it back.
When he kisses her again, hug the closest person next to you in delight.
Even if the person is Jaken.
When she gets kidnapped by the half brother, encourage the lord to go save her.
But there would be no time to encourage,
Because the second she's gone,
He'll be right after her.
Giddy and worrisome,
Rin
~Paranoid Crack Abuser
