I have most of the thing typed out, most of the chapters (well, I have 10, there might be more). So if I get enough reviews and enough people looking at this thing, I will continue updating once a week. But if I don't get enough of the two, this story is gone.

Introductions and Pretest

Contestants: Sinead Starling, Hamilton Holt, Amy and Dan Cahill, Ian and Natalie Kabra, Jonah Wizard

Host: Now, the contestants for this new reality show, a new concept featuring the use of athleticism, brains, and talents, are aged 13 to 20. Do you mind taking a little of your time to introduce yourselves?

Sinead: Sure, I will go first!

Host: Go ahead.

Sinead: I'm a really smart person in my opinion, and I'm the top student of the state. I also won the State Science Fair for 2 years straight! I also won an inventing competition for inventing a lacrosse stick (sorry, remembered that the Starlings looked like Ivy League Lacrosse Team in the first book) that could be broken up into pieces and reassembled!

Hamilton: (Rolls eyes) Big deal….

Host: Those are quite some accomplishments. I'm sure you will use your brains wisely in this game.

Audience: Cheer!

Host: Next?

Ian Kabra: I will. (Takes the mike). Those talents are fine and dandy, but nothing beats charm and good looks when I'm trying to bribe….. um…. Persuade some people in this show. I'm also very smart; didn't you hear I won the London writing championship? I'm also very athletic….. Did you know I'm a master in polo? I also had lunch with the queen a few weeks ago.

Natalie Kabra: We are super rich. You might not believe how many those foolish old women… I mean our wise customers….. Are interested in the yucky…. I mean fabulous paintings that Ian sell.

Host: Really? Ian Kabra, you are certainly a fine young man. Natalie Kabra…. Ummm… you are a great sister, probably. Ian, I would say you are a favorite to win.

All the contestants except Ian: (Looks annoyed, especially Sinead and Natalie)

Host: Next?

Hamilton Holt: Hand me the mic. Ian, you might be a master at polo, but I'm the master a t all the IMPORTANT sports.

Ian Kabra: Are you saying polo isn't-

Hamilton Holt: I can actually climb up Mt. Everest, thank you, and I am the best athlete to ever step in Iowa. Maybe except for my dad. And I'm not much of a dunce that you think I am.

Host: (Sinead and Natalie are losers; Hamilton and Ian are shaping out to be top dogs…)

Dan Cahill: Me next. I can beat you all, because I have a good memory. Really good memory.

Amy Cahill: We aren't talented at anything, but we are very well rounded. Dan with his memory, me with the information I can provide.

Audience: Cheer!

Host: (Of course they're cheering, it seems like they will be the underdogs!)

Jonah Wizard: Yo, yo, yo, hand me the mic.

Audience: Scream (like in Diary of the Wimpy Kid)!

Host: I see we have a celebrity!

Jonah Wizard: Got it. What's better than being famous and rich? I'm also mega-talented….

Dan Cahill: Famous and Rich? Yeah. Talented? No.

Audience: Boo!

Jonah Wizard: Thanks for the love. I will win this for sure.

Audience: Cheer! (A wild girl fan tries to jump out of the crowd to leap on to Jonah, but Jonah ducks and the girl crashed into cameras)

Audience: Ouch…. (The girl and two cameramen were carted away)

Jonah Wizard: These people are crazy…..

Host: I see. Now that the contestants have introduced themselves, let's move onto our first game, which is a pretest to prepare the contestants of what to come!

Host: For people who don't know, this is a show that the contestants will need to use their heads, talents, and athleticism on, and the contestants who get the least points for two straight weeks will be kicked off the show until one last man is standing. So let's roll!

Audience: Cheer!

Camera fades to black, after commercial…..

Host: We are at the survival course!

Host: Each team will compete in a course full of mud pits, rope course

Ian Kabra: I don't have much luck at those….

Host: tire sprinting, tower climbing

Hamilton Holt: Sounds like a race for me

Host: and in the end a test, which will test your knowledge and your talents.

Jonah Wizard: Got that covered.

Host: For the teams that have more than one member, you will choose one member to compete, to make it fair.

Natalie Kabra: You go, Ian, I don't want to get dirty!

Ian Kabra: …..

Natalie Kabra: I will take that as a yes.

Dan Cahill: Don't say anything, Amy, I'm going. Time to prove I'm the master of this!

Amy Cahill: Whatever and I knew you were going up.

Hamilton Holt: I'm going to win. Most of this is a Tomas job anyways…. Rock climbing? My favorite.

Sinead Starling: We Ekats might not be the best athletes, but we always have a surprise up our sleeves, you just watch.

Dan Cahill: You got the surprise thing from Alistair, didn't you?

Sinead Starling: …

Jonah Wizard: I hate this thing under the bag, this is for me to win, y'all.

All the competitors: You don't have talent.

Jonah Wizard: That hurt, yo…..

Host: Now that things have settled down, let us start the pre race.

Host: Ref, you ready?

Referee: Before we start-

Dan Cahill: Start Already!

Referee: (Ignoring Dan) there are some rules. The teams will go at separate times, so you better choose your orders. The winner will be the team that took the least time completing the course.

Dan Cahill: First

Ian Kabra: Second

Sinead Starling: Third

Jonah Wizard: Fourth

Hamilton Holt: Last. Because I'm the best.

Referee: So Dan Cahill, you will go in 10

Dan Cahill: (Hurriedly gets into position)

Referee: 9… 8… 7… 6… 5… 4… 3… 2… 1… Go!

I like the script format (cause I'm an actor), and I'm going to keep it. Also review! Give your thoughts, some suggestions (even thought I've written most of it, I could always make some changes, minor or major), etc. As always, constructive criticism is allowed. Thanks!