Hello... This is my first story so please spare me. I'll be updating every once in a while... whenever I feel like it really, more often with more views and reviews. I'm basing the characters in it on an RP forum I made, so please go over to that. It's called Tribe Where Magic Resides, just like this story. I've read fanfiction, so I'll be copying most from what I've seen. Like review replies, I'll be doing that... but let's begin.

Sapphire- shape-shifter, but generally a fox; as any furred animal she is black with white spots like a night sky. She has glowing green eyes and black feathered wings.

The black creature sat on a rock overlooking a large valley. It was a hundred feet down, but she didn't seem to care as she sat on the very edge. Her sharp gaze was moving across the starry sky that night, as if she were reading something. Eventually she sighed and lay down.

They say I will lead only the most powerful tribe, and soon. They have never lied before, but there are none remotely like me here... She thought aloud. If there were, I wouldn't be alone tonight.

Sighing, she stretched. She sent a portion of her mind out and checked the mind of every creature in the valley. To her surprise, not far was around ten active minds. One was harder to see. Gotcha. But as she double-checked the others, she found that they were all focused on one thing. Her.

Suddenly, an eerie howl sounded, not far off. Another, responding, even closer. The black creature raised herself in a flash as she heard and felt pounding steps, maybe a hundred feet away. A bright flash of light and a teenaged human was standing, knees bent, twin long bladed pocket knives in hand. Her hair was a very dark red-orange, with streaks of blonde and brown. Her odd green eyes were the same, and she was lean without any womanly figure. But this odd being had more inside her than seemed possible.

As soon as a wolf leaped alongside the edge of the overhang, it fell over the side as if it had been struck. But the girl had only glanced at it before another came from the other side. She cut it's outstretching paw off in one swipe. She kicked it off the edge. She suddenly jumped into the air and a pair of black angel wings appeared, silently lifting her. The wolf yelped as it slid off the edge after what it thought would be a goo surprise attack.

She turned, eyes wide and mouth slightly open, making a growling sound. The other wolves ran off in fear of the thing that had killed a third of their once powerful pack. She looked at the blood spattered on the ground to her right, surrounding a single paw. "Ugh. Nasty." Remembering the third wolf that had involuntarily jumped off the edge, she said, "Must have been their Alpha..." She sighed and looked up at the stars yet again.

"I believe I found one. A wolf, in the pack. Younger than the rest, but adequate. She was different. Her eyes... She's destined to be mine. IN, mine. She'll be the next Alpha. But she'll know I am taking her. Spirits of the stars, you were right again. I have found the first with magic."

I think I did good enough... right? I know it's short but I did it all in like less than 30 minutes... hopefully it's ~suspensefullness ~ is enough to keep you wanting more... Give me advice, please! Also, what should the special wolf's name be? I'm thinking Willow or Moon... vote or come up with your own idea!

Willow-0

Moon-0

Others?

Thanks for reading! ~SS