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My oc outift looks like The Force Unleashed 2 Heros armor but black with an ancient sith empire emblem on his right shoulder A Black BackPack and a black Wrist Comm And Jammer Hes.

As im sitting at the bar i order 2 shots "Bartender need 2 more shots here"I say "sure" the bartender says I then notice 1 tall human with a strange mark on his armors shoulder "odd" I said out loud. I notice him get into a fight he draws his light saber oh no hes a Jedi They don't take kindly to sith. I hid my lightsabers behind my cloak I then notice its still attached at the hilt I took it apart then started to walk towards the exit. I Then notice a cute Torgruta at the entrance I then notice a lightsaber at her hip I think maybe i can make some money I then garbed it and started walking i start to go to the next bar. I look behind me to see her looking at me with the lightsaber in my hand I notice I did not have my mask on so i throw it on and force jump over the edge and garbed a police speeder and speed off.I decided to go back to my home instead I head to the local hotel were i "live". I still don't know what i'm going to do with the saber I decided to sleep on it. I woke to a knock on my door I put my mask on and open the door I saw 2 people a old Cosian and the cute Torgurta."Yes" I said worried "we are looking for a rouge Jedi who last been seen here have you seen anyone with a red mask... wait the mask sir..." that's all the could Togruta could say

before i forced pushed them and ran i hear a blaster shot then I felt a seering pain in my left should "Just a graze" I Heared a young voice yell "Stun not kill stun" I heard footsteps running towards me I ran towards the towards a drop off near district 1313 i stop near the edge were my "borrowed" police speeder was.I look behind me to see if i lost them i only saw the Torgruta i decided to try to tease her. "I did not know the beauty could run too" i could see her blush lightly i noticed a lightsaber at her side i realized i left it home "Enough Jackson ur under arrest"I chuckled "sure" i said i activated my 2 lightsabers 1 yellow and 1 Red I took stance vappad form seven she does reverse grip form 5 the way of the Krayt Dragon she makes the first move she charges at me and starts swinging at me. I start to block not wanting to kill her maybe injure her but not kill. "hey Beautiful don't try so hard you might hurt ur self" i said while i block her attacks "shut up"she said lightly blushing I heard her say. i got over confident and she found a flaw she tap my arm witch made it limp in pain "Goddammit!" i screamed started to fight with my 1 arm i then got shot by a stun blast and black out.I woke up Tied to a restrainer i looked around to find i was tied down i saw 2

human males and the Togruta on the platform i hear the younger looking one call to the Togruta "Ahsoka go see if the prisoners ok" the younger one says she walks over and sits near me "hey cuty" i say giving my best smile "don't try to get out of this ur going to prison punk"she said looking away i could see a little blush i notice both my lightsabers on her belt. I Then see that my force shackles and off i use the force to unlock the shackles then ahsoka is called by her master and moves away.I get up and start to run thru the hanger i force call my sabers and hear ahsoka call "master hes escaping!" i hear quick footsteps i reach a edge and look over to see a big drop i jump and go down a tunnel i land and hide in an alleyway i jump up hid in the dark i look over to see if anyone fallowed me i see ahsoka fall down and saw she hurt her leg. I was going to run but i saw thought "im not a heartless sith i need to help her" i run to her before she could activate her saber i forced called it and attached it to my back holster she started to yell but passed out. I picked her up bridle style in my arms and found a small motel i locked the door and placed her on the bed.I healed her the best i could but riped my cloak and a chair leg to make a splint i healed her leg and then restrained her i sat in a chair waiting for her to wake up. It did not take long she woke up and started for her saber till she

realized she was restrained and no saber she looked at me with a death stare."you Probably have questions ask away" i said staring at her "why did you help me sith"she said wary "ok first i could not leave a pretty lady like you on the street" i said while putting my hand on her heel she kicks it off and and swears at me "hey ok i just making sure ur other leg was ok" i said lying "well get some sleep cuty" i said walking to the other bed i turn around to see her blushing trying to not show it.