Hi! This is my first fanfic so please be nice, also I would like to have constructive criticism. All my stories will start out with this type of talking then switch over to other stuff.
Future Lloyd: Computer, data analysis on Dloyd's son!
Computer: Jack My Ride has after being left for dead on the streets of Seattle raised to the top of the world of earth. by the time he was 10. He is strongest and most flexible there. He is most intelligent with an IQ of 400. But here, he would be small and weak. His body wouldn't be able to handle mana, exspheres or higher forms of them would burn out if he used them. BUT on the small chance that he survived long enough he would become insanely strong.
Future Lloyd: Now I shall move him into a timeline that can be messed with before he is used against me!
?: Now isn't that a little paranoid?
Computer: Yeah, it's a little paranoid... and can I have a cookie?
?: Sure, let me go steal some from Kvar.
Future Lloyd: Isn't he dead?
?: Well I go into the past.
Computer: How do I know they will taste good?
Future Lloyd: Kratos said they tasted wonderful!
?: Just believe whatever someone who betrayed you says huh?
Future Lloyd: Shut up little shadow, even if you cant be killed by normal weapons I can still kill you with the eternal sword, I know how to fight in... the darkness or as you say the 'Negative Plant'
?: It's the negative plane and you don't have the practice to use ALL the power of it!
Future Lloyd: I don't need to! and besides you might get a distraction or two as I use the sword!
?: I think you are just being a little arrogant right now.
Future Lloyd: As if you can do something about that!
?: One spar should be enough to show you my tremendous power!
Computer: I still need my cookie!
A shadowy shape popped up "Prepare yourself!" said a ragged serpentine voice.
A muscular person in a red suit got up. "I don't need to!" said Future Lloyd. As he held out his hands and made two eternal swords appear in them. "Now FALCONS CREST RELEASE 25% OF MY POWER!"
The shadowy shape smiled "using your most powerful move to start out with? what a standard technique, BLACK WAVE!" a burst of shadowy substance shoots out from the form as it makes a gesture.
Lloyd smirked and hit the substance with his hand, causing it to disappear. Then released his wings which were twice as big as in the game and 8 of them. "DON'T HOLD BACK YOU MONSTER!"
The Shadow smirked. "I wouldn't if you would give me the other holders of the fragments of my soul, then you would be able to release more than ΒΌ of your power- EXPLOSION"
Lloyd caught the explosion and sliced it in half. "that was a weak fire spell- EFREETS EXSPLOSIVE FORCE" sending a giant fireball bigger than the moon at the shadow.
The Shade-like force extended a hand and the fireball disappeared. "Stop this, Indignation judgement!"
"more weak atta-GAAAAAH" Future Lloyd started as giant bolts of lightning started raining down at him. "I FORGOT YOU COULD DO THAT!"
"does that mean I win?" The Voice said as the shadow disappeared.
"All right, fine!" A frazzled Future Lloyd snapped. "I'm still going to put Joe through hell!"
"Then I'll follow that Lloyd..." The Voice said.
"Just as long as you don't force his hand." Future Lloyd sneered.
"Whatever you say Pink Floyd." The Shadow said. "After all, I won't need to if Joe gets close enough to him"
Disclaimer: I don't own Tales of Symphonia
Will the computer ever get his cookie?
