Hey guys this is my first fan fiction so don't expect much
He smelled it the scent of squirrel was strong in the air. His paws itched eagerly as he crouched low getting ready to pounce. The squirrel was more than a foot away he inched forward about to pounce when his name FIRE KIT rang across the forest .The squirrel turned and sprinted away. No he thought to himself he got up and turned around to see who scared away his meal but he saw no one. FIRE KIT he heard again. He was getting scared there was no other cat in sight. Then he woke up he saw that he was in the warm nursery den not the forest. He looked to his side and saw his sister Snow Kits blue eyes staring at him. What do you want he said groggily still recovering from his dream? The full moon meeting is about to start and I wanted to see if you wanted to spy on it with me she said eagerly. He thought for a moment "It sounds fun but what about Gran san she's watching the den tonight and we can't sneak out Fire Kit said. Gran san was one of the elders that watched the den sometimes when the kits were up to no good and after what they did last week she would be watching them every night for a while. Last week after the elders went to bed they tried to go into the forest but one of the guards caught them. They got the speech about they were too young to go into the forest and stuff like that. Your right Snow kit said we need to find a way to sneak past her." How about we don't go at all we always get caught plus soon we will be old enough to go to clan meetings Fire Kit added. "Yes but that is one month away and by the time we get are twelfth moon names all the good news will be gone and we won't want to go to the clan meeting because the will be boring Snow Kit said. Just as he was about to say something Gran San walked in she must of heard all the commotion. "If you kits are thinking of sneaking out don't even think about it Gran San said firmly. "Yes Gran San the kits said "Now I want you two kits to go straight to sleep Said Gran San "Yes Gran San ". Finally said Fire Kit I can go back to dreaming" he closed his eyes and went back to sleep. Unfortunately Fire Kits dreams for the rest of the night weren't hunting in the forest they were watching Snow Kit running into a wall over and over until she went through it. When he woke up he saw Snow Kit and Moss Kit sleeping. Moss Kit was there den mate he was younger than them and wouldn't get his twelfth moon name till two moons from now unlike Fire Kit and Snow Kit they would get there twelfth moon name one moon from now. He decided to get an early breakfast and see if they had fresh kill yet. He wasn't supposed to eat kill yet but he was tired of his mother feeding him and try a squirrel or a duck even. As he neared the entrance to the den and saw that no elder was guarding it. He stepped out of the den and into the early sunlight he saw the fresh kill pile and made a dash for it. He could see and smell the squirrel, dove, mouse, and mole. His eyes wandered over to the nice plump still warm squirrel. He looked around and picked it up with his paws. He was about to take a bite when he heard a voice "Fire Kit what do you think you are doing" he turned and saw his mom the clan leader looking at him. His mom was white furred like Snow Kit and had reddish brownish eyes like Fire Kit. "Umm checking the kill for poisoning Fire Kit said. "Fire Kit you know you can't eat kill yet you will have to wait till the next moon said his mom. His moms name was Gold Star she was the leader of the clan. Fire Kits dad is a warrior and they don't see him a lot. "Mom please let have one small bite this squirrel is so plump and juicy looking Fire Kit pleaded. "Let me think Gold Star said No now go back to the kit den and get a bit more sleep it's still not yet early sun. "Can I stay up please Fire Kit said I am already awake and early sun is almost here. He gave his mom the best kitty cat face he could muster. "Fine Gold Star said but you need to eat first the more full you are the less I have to worry about you taken from the fresh kill pile. After Fire Kit ate he went back to the kit den to see if Snow Kit was up. Snow Kit are you in their Fire Kit said "Yes but you woke me up what do you want she responded? Just seeing if you want to play he said. Sure she said then the two kits wandered off to see were Moss Kit was
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