This is the editor! The author is a good author but has really bad grammer, so that's where I come from. She is right here actually, but doesn't know what to put… To be honest I have no idea what I'm doing…
Ch. 1
Maka
We have been through a lot. Everyone. Through it all, and soon it was one fight after another and I was pretty messed up. Soul had to take me home and is cleaning up my deep cuts and scrapes, it burns like hell.
"SHIT!"
"Hold still Maka." Soul said in an agitated tone.
"But it stings!" I wined
"Be quite and keep still" he repeated
Even though it was a little awkward, I kind of liked it. Cleaning each other's wounds was refreshing with this unspoken bond between us. I would trust him with my life, but does he feel the same?
Soul
She won't stop squirming.
"Quite fidgeting and I'm done"
"Okay, now you." she says with a smirk on her face.
"Fine fine." I took off my shirt while she put hers back on.
This feeling is weird, I don't know what it is, and I don't like it.
"There, now your legs." Maka said sleepily.
It felt really awkward taking my pants off, all I want to do is sleep. I'm so tired.
This is where I say review right? Help me out guys!