Alright, this is a little challenge I heard about on LiveJournal. The idea is to pick a pairing, character or fandom of your choice... pick a song, play it... and while the song is playing, you write a drabble. Once the song is over you stop. No lingering. I decided to try it.

Title: Loneliness
Pairing: KakaSaku, SasuSaku
Song: "The Loneliness" by Babyface
Word Count: 195
Date: 5/21/08

Loneliness

I wish that she would tell me how she feels.

There's something in her eyes that screams every time I see her. Sakura is slowly dying.

Her emerald eyes are watching me now, with nothing more than a look of resigned defeat.

She lies next to me, her every curve pressed into mine. I return her gaze and looking at her I realize I miss her.

Like she misses him.

I miss her bright smiles -bright even when they were a small curve of her lips-, her glowing eyes, her vaguely musical voice and laughter, even her rants against my tardiness and penchant for reading my books in public.

When this started, I knew what I was getting into. Her eyes only saw the boy she knew so many years ago.

And I kept going, confident that there was no chance that I would ever fall for her.

Hindsight is a bitch.

Sakura closes her eyes, blocking away the echoing scream that she repeatedly fails to hide from me.

She feels alone.

Lying next to her I belatedly realize that I feel the same.

With this stranger that used to be Sakura, I feel alone.


What do you think?