Hey who's this? She's cute." Those were the first words I heard him say.

The day started out like any other day. I got up and ready for school. I walked down and met with my older brother James getting ready for work. I had on my favorite purple shirt with jeans and my black jacket.

"Hey Jen. Sleep well?" James asked me as I walked over putting my long blonde hair up in a pony tail.

"Yeah I woke up early to start writing but again I couldn't think of anything." I said getting my book bag and going to the door.

"Well you'll think of something. Hey I'll be home late tonight so do you think you can manage without me?" I nodded and walked out the door. I walked over to the high school to meet my two friends Jacob and Alex.

"Hey sorry we could be there for your birthday. How did your dad feel when you turned 16?" Jacob said.

"Well he couldn't stay long so all he did was give me a laptop and wished me a happy birthday."

"Hey you said you tell us about the story your writing." Alex said. She was always the one to want to hear everything. I told them at lunch and we all went to class.

It came to lunch time and I sat next to them and I started to tell the story.

"Alright It's about a boy named Kilik. He meets up with two people and they travel together. Their names are Maxi and Xianghua. Well they're searching for a sword called Soul Edge. A sword that uses a host.

The story starts out when Kilik is a young boy. Xianglian is like his sister and the closest person to him. Soul Edge had just found a new host. He came across the temple. He killed everyone in sight. Kilik was hiding while Xianglian was trying to protect him. She was killed right in front of his own eyes. That was when he was like 6, now that he his 18 he has his own gang and is now searching for Soul Edge to destroy him. Him, a man named Maxi, and Xianghua. The sword named Soul Edge, has a few followers with him to find his new hosts. They're Tira, Ivy, and Raphael. When Soul Edge needs a new host soon they look for one. A far as I've gotten is when Kilik and Maxi and Xianghua are taking shelter in a women's home. Her name was Sophitia. Her and Kilik were taking when Tira showed up.

"Who are you and what do you want!" Sophitia demanded. Tira just smiled and ran back towards the trees. She disappeared. As quick as she came. After Kilik, Maxi, and Xianghua ran into Seong Mi-na, the weapons master of Korea, and her student Yun-Seong. I left off where they're all staying in a town and then nothing. I couldn't think of anything else."

"So far the story sounds good. Better then Jacob thought it would be." Alex told me.

"Alex! I never thought it'd be bad! How could you think that I would think something like that!" Jacob said then started pouting.

"I was just joking Jaocb. You really need to now how to take a joke." After a while the bell rang and we had to go back to class.

After school I went to my computer and tryed so hard to think of something but I still couldn't think of anything. I was wishing and wishing for an idea. Please give my and idea. Something for my story please.

Suddenly a darkness surrounded me and its all i could see. I still couldn't see anything. I couldn't even tell where I was. I for sure wasn't home any more. I stood up and fely the ground disappear below my feet. I felt a breeze on my face. I fell and was laying on something soft and slowly fell asleep