Hi This is my first fanfiction. Any help would be greatly appreciated along with ideas for the story. Please don't just tell me my story is bad idc if you do but at least tell me why it's bad. My goal is to write a chapter every other day. That's why the will be shorter then normal.
Chapter 1 Final Game of the Season
It has been four years since the battle of napalm and Brian is enjoying life. Currently playing for FPS Pro Team NYA, New York Alphas. His teammates and coach have welcomed him with open arms since the start of the season and have become great friends with each of them. Our coach was the biggest asshole while also being the nicest coach you could have. His name was Dominic King, but the team just called him coach. Jimmy Smith(Alpha Jynx) is their close range specialist, team captain, and currently in the race for MVP of the regular season with a total of 223 kills with his SMG alone. Bobby and Freddy Miller(Alpha and Alpha Boom) are twins that can read each other minds and work off each other in complete synch. There weapon of choice explosives. The sniper of our team is Daphne White (Alpha Ghost) and my best friend on the team. Then Brian(Alpha DShot) who looking to become rookie of the year with a total of 195 kills throughout the season. Although this season is a little different because each team is competing to play in the 1st ever FPS World Cup with the winners of the championship going on to compete.
Brian POV
It is the last game of the regular season and they are playing our heated rival, the Massachusetts Warriors in their stadium. Currently, it is tied up two/two with the Alphas have a clear advantage as they were playing their best mode is just a straight up 5 vs 5 last team standing wins Both teams are fighting for a spot in the playoffs with the winner going to play in the semifinals. It is currently a 2 vs 3 situations with Daphne and myself after both the twins were picked off when coming back from planting claymores and Jimmy was sniped when peeking to find the positions of the opponents. Although this wasn't before he took out two of the warriors. I look over to Daph and we both smile at each other as a massive explosion goes off from the twins Claymore taking out one of the opponents. As Daph looking over at me she is gunned done by an AR, leaving me all alone against the best players on the warriors. We never know who we are up against all we know is their Gamertags unless we personally tell the opponents or have a connection with them. I currently am up against King and Beta. As I rotate around the map I spot both of them King is across the map but Beta is a lot closer to me. I silently take out Beta with a tomahawk. But sadly I was not sneaky enough as I am shot at by King. Luckily he just misses me I return fire with my AR and hit him from halfway across the map. And with that Alpha celebrates we all hug and as we leave the gaming setups which has two doors one to go to where the fans are watching or to go backstage to remain a mystery. We decided as a team that we would not reveal ourselves until we lost or won at the World Cup.
As we were leaving we met up with the warrior's teams even if we were heated rivals didn't mean we were not friends. It was a tradition that the losers took the winner out for dinner and hang out in the hotel rooms afterward and party for a good part of the nights. One of my favorite things to do in the morning is to communicate with our fans. Even though we don't reveal our face, we still use social media to communicate. It was awesome to see fans wearing our jersey which had our Gamertags on the backs and Team name along with sponsors on the front. As I finally got done messaging a few fans either asking questions about my personal life or advice on how to play. I decided to get ready since we had to take a flight to were the semifinals and finals were being held in Orlando, Florida which I was super excited about since I have never been. The team planned on going to Walt Disney World when we were down there since we had a few days before the events were taking place. As I finish up packing I hear a knock at the door I go to open the door to find Daphnee standing there with her suitcase and backpack in hand. I welcome her in and she goes to sit on the bed to wait for me to finish packing. I finish packing except for my wallet I frantically begin looking for. Only to see Daph with a smile on her face looking at the photos I keep in my wallet. A couple is of our team, one with me and her goofing around and a couple from when I went to VGHS. I have one with Ted and Ki, another with Jenny, and one with all of us together. I stick my hand out for my wallet and with a smile on her face she hands me my wallet saying "Hope you weren't looking for this." I respond "You know I was." She says "I am surprised you still have it." I just smile at her and say "it is one of my favorites. When I first got onto the team I and Daphne hit it off really well and we tried dating. But it was never meant to be, it was one of those things, we were too good of friends to date. Plus it just made things awkward between us and the team.
We left the hotel room to go meet up with the rest of the team so that we could go to the Logan International Airport to catch our flight. We safely made it to the airport, checked our bags in and made it through security and went to go sit naked to where our plane was taking off. We left the bags with Coach so we could get some lunch since it was already 1 pm. (They skipped Breakfast.) As the Twins and Jimmy were getting a couple of pizza for everyone I and Daphne went to get snacks for everyone for the flight to Orlando such as chips, drinks, and gum. So we ate lunch and by the time we finished, it was time to start boarding for our flight. As we got onto the plan I pulled out my handheld version of FPS along with the rest of the team to have a friendly free for all match. We finally arrived after a Long four-hour flight. Brian thought I hope we don't have to travel a lot if we make it to the world cup.'
