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"Blooms at sunrise" was having a normal day.
As a seeker it was his duty to patrol the streets whenever he could in order to keep an eye out for danger. So far there was nothing but peace and serenity. He liked that. He was driving along with his friend "sings at sunset". Their names were very similar which is why they preferred to patrol together.
Today they were going down a road waving to all who they passed. They loved going down this road everyone here seemed to be particularly happy. The only reason they really patrolled at all was that there might be an accident, they happened sometimes though very rarely. He was enjoying the peace and calm when all of a sudden a voiced blared on the police scanner. "All units are requested to go to the shipyard immediately repeat to the shipyard!" Blooms at sunrise quickly turned the car around and headed to the shipyard with the sirens on.
It took him two minutes to get there. When he came on the scene he saw that many other seekers were there and they all looked very nervous. He looked around and saw a few faces that he knew, the shipyard seemed to be abandoned with the exception of the seekers. He could see the building where they constructed the ships in the center of the mass of seekers. There were a few buildings around along with many cryotanks that weren't occupied; all of the ones with souls in them were evacuated along with the other souls.
"What's happening?" he asked the nearest seeker to him he answered "there seems to be a bomb in there and it's on a very short timer."
He sounded scared. As did everybody at the scene. All of the incoming ships were directed elsewhere while they tried to defuse the bomb. After about three minutes someone came out and said that it was disarmed. Everybody felt relieved. Blooms went over and asked about the situation. "It didn't seem to be a very good bomb, the explosion probably wouldn't have done much damage and it didn't look like whoever made it didn't put a lot of effort into it."
"Who could have done this"
"humans of course you know how violent they are!" of course it would be humans they were the most violent of all the species. They would gladly cut us all to pieces if given the chance.
"So this seemed easy the bomb was disarmed now all we have to do is…" he never got a chance to finish. The center of his forehead suddenly had a hole in it and the back of his head blew open with a giant spurt of blood. We looked around for the source of the shot. Before anyone looked all the way around another person was down. We all took our guns out two more were down when we drew them. We looked around wildly souls were going down left and right. We finally found the saw the shooter who was positioned on a building to the left. We saw the reflection of the gun.
We began to barrage the shooter who ducked out of the way and ran into the building. He heard gunshots all around him and the sound of them all were hurting his ears. He was surprised to look in his hands to find that he was firing as well. We fired on him for about a minute. When we stopped firing he looked around and saw that twelve seekers were down, the sniper was very accurate he got a head shot every time. He felt saddened by the lost seekers, they were good souls. All souls were good.
Humans were so violent, of course they would do anything to take as many lives as they could. Twelve souls were now dead because of one human. A couple of seekers inched their way towards the building they were soon followed by the rest of us. They went into the building and a few seconds later they sounded the all clear. He started to feel relieved. He did not want to face a human even surrounded by his fellow seekers, they terrified him. Souls died today and he once again felt the grief of those that were lost. But a second later the building suddenly exploded taking the seekers inside with it.
The force of the explosion knocked him back and he was dazed for a few seconds. When he came to he could hear more gunshots… and screams. Horrible bloodcurdling screams that sent s a shiver down his spine. He looked around for the source of the screams which was difficult since there was dust all around. But then he saw Shadows in the dust. Souls were firing at some sort of speeding shadow that twisted and turned and rushed towards the souls.
Then he saw one of the shadow split in two as the fast one went through it. And then the same thing happened to another and another until only the fast shadow remained. When the dust cleared he saw what it was. The figure appeared as the dust cleared and it looked to be someone in a long black cloak. he didn't look to be very large only about 5'7 or so and was a little on the slim side. He had a backpack on that seemed to be very bulky. He took it off and took out what looked to be a very large contraption of metal and wires and set it down. Very smoothly he put it down and started to press a few buttons, it was then that he actually was aware of what just happened.
"You monster!" he yelled at him. "Blooms at sunrise" was furious at him a feeling that he was not used to. Although he was yelling at the human he did not respond and simply carried on with his work.
"Why did you do all of this, why did you kill all of the innocent souls!" It was then that the human looked up at him and instead of the hatred that he was expecting he saw, nothing. There was nothing in his eyes no expression on his face he looked like his face was carved from stone. He opened his mouth and spoke in an expressionless almost robotic tone
"you started this war; you're the ones who caused this, innocence does not exist for your kind who have killed so many."
And then he simply walked away. He stared away at where he vanished and then the device started to beep. He knew it was a bomb and he tried to crawl away but it was already too late the bomb exploded. He felt incredible pain at first and then nothing.