Title: Fallen

Title:                 Fallen

Summary:            I can't do this because it would give away the plot

Content:            Nothing violent or rude, just thought provoking (hopefully), oh and a character death right at the end

Disclaimer:            Well I don't own them so I'm not getting anything from this

Authors Notes:            Feedback PLEEEEEEEEEASE

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Fallen

            I've gotta keep going, keep pushing.  Not too much farther now.  The rains beating down into my face, my scrunched up features trying desperately hard to see through the dense mesh of clinging branches and the blood pouring from my face.  The branches whip my already beaten and bruised face.  They whip the deep gash running across my forehead.  I try not to cry out but the pain is almost unbearable already.

            They're closer now.  They clump between the thick tree trunks, manoeuvring agilely between the trunks, seemingly impossible by the metal plates they bear across their chests.  They shout abuse at me but I keep going limping heavily on my broken ankle.  I've gotta keep going, keep pushing.  My legs are tired.  They feel like the have two dead weights strapped to my flimsy ankles.  My lungs refuse to take in enough oxygen, I've got to stop.

            I dodge left throwing my weight against the tree.  The posse barge past, oblivious to them now chasing no-one.  I squeeze my eyes shut and gasp for the air.  I'm breathing too heavily, too loudly.  They'll hear me when they come back.  A crack of thunder whips through the air as the lightning illuminates the woods.  The Gate's not far now.  I fumble around in my pockets for the slender metal object.  Its battered but it'll work.

            I hear their shouting again.  I try to get up but my ribs ache, at least three broken.  I try to block out the pain, focus on getting home.  I launch off the stump, moving between the trunks.  I crack of a staff weapon echoed out, destroying the tree just a yard away.  Shards of wood fly every where and I'm dazed for a second.  I risk taking a look behind me.  There nearly on top of me.  I dig my heals in and burst into the clearing.

            The Gate stands proud atop a small hill, the DHD maybe forty-five feet in front. I smack down the seven symbols before blasting open the gate with the red sphere resting in the middle.  I punch in ten digits with a beep on the battered metal object and start my final journey to the Stargate.  Pain runs up my legs and across my back but I keep going.  Explosions rain out besides my feet,  Their shots were getting better, I push harder.  I pound up the stairs and step just as another crack flies through the sky.  A searing pain jolts my body the final few steps, the pain accumulating just between my shoulder blades.

            I fall I keep falling.  And then I land.

            I smack into the metal ramp face first, sirens blaring wildly around me.  I try and hang on but I can't.  I hear three voices calling me.  They storm up to were I lie as I prise open my body.  A young man, his sky blue eyes staring at mine.  His face is cut, a massive bruise smothered most of his right cheek.  He keeps calling me his  voice shaky, scared.  I try and reply but another voice.  A strong female voice calls out to me.  I twist to gaze at her cradling her broken left arm, a deep cut running across her temple.  Her right arm wrapped tightly around her ribs.  A deeper male voice yells at me now, his face beaten but in better shape than the others.

            I take my final breathe in this world, happy to know they all got back.  They may have taken me from this world but another System Lord has fallen.  They keep calling me, but I've gone now.  I've fallen out of this world…