Another story I'm toying with.
Okay so here's a chapter, and I'm going to post the Alice story I'm toying with just tell me what you think.
Okay so here we go.
Pretty much this is going to be pretty different from twilight.
Its going to take back in 1918. To present.
Edward and Bella.
Epv.
Chapter 1
On top of the world.
I was out walking around town, it was a warm day, considering it was in Chicago. It didn't really get to warm around here. I was seventeen, young, in love, and ready to fight for my country. I had been waiting for this day for so long.
I had just got back from signing up to be in the army. I was on my way back to see my number one priority.
Bella.
My love, my everything. Tonight was the night, I would propose to her. I would give her my heart completely. I was planning on taking her to the finest restaurant, with the oldest wine. I was ready to spend the rest of my life with the women I loved. I had gotten the blessing from her father Charlie, I know seventeen was young, but I had spent 2 years with her.
And now I was positive she was who I wanted to spend my life with. Bella was beautiful, Her Mahoney hair, don't to her waist, in loose curls, her chocolate brown eyes. Her full lips, ivory skin. She was the most beautiful girl in the world.
And she was mine.
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Before picking Bella up.
I ran my fingers through my hair, finishing the last touches. I made sure my black pants didn't look wrinkly. I checked my bow tie. I decided everything looked fine.
I through my blazer on and was out the door.
I pulled up, and jumped out. I felt in my pocket to make sure the ring was still in its case. I walked to the door, and knocked Gently.
Her father answered the door.
"Good evening Mr. Swan." I nodded.
"How many times have I told you to call me Charlie, son? Sheesh you make me feel so old." He chuckled. "Come in, she's almost ready." I walked past him sitting in a rocking chair in the den.
"How's Edward, and Elizabeth doing?" He asked sitting in the loveseat neck to me.
"They're doing fine. How are you?" I asked politely back.
"Good, good. So tonight's the big night eh?" He asked.
"Yeah…Tonight's the night." I murmured nervously.
"What's tonight?" I heard her voice from the end of the stairs, I turned to see her.
She was in a light blue dress, that was satin. It stopped at her feet, her hair pulled back with a diamond clip.
She curtsied at me. I smiled hugely at her, bowing.
"You look absolutely stunning." I said as I took her hand and kissed it.
"You look pretty fancy yourself." She blushed.
"Well, we must be going, we don't want to be late for our reservation." I said glancing at the clock.
"Of course, I'll see you around…?"Charlie asked.
"Ten thirty sharp sir." Bella smiled once again.
"Okay, you two have fun."
"Bye Daddy, I love you." she ran over and kissed him on the cheek.
We walked out to my car, I opened the door. Still smiling at her. I was so excited about tonight.
"What have you been doing all day?" she asked, playing with my free hand.
"Nothing really, I have a few surprises to talk about with you though." I smiled sheepishly at her.
"oh really, well. I can't wait. Your so happy tonight." she commented.
"Well, that my dear, would be for me to know, and you to find out."
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"Edward, why are we going here!" she said in utter shock.
"Love, this is special." keeping my poker face.
"I'm sure whatever the reason, its not necessary for all of this." I smiled, and helped her out of the car.
We were at a fancy Italian restaurant, Montello Bistro. I walked her in, and greeted the hostess.
"Do you have a reservation sir?" The man asked.
"Yes, two for Mason." he motioned us to a private area, outside. The table was candlelit, with a man playing the piano. He laid the menu's down and pulled the chair out for Bella, then me.
"Thank you." I said.
"Your welcome, your waiter will be right with you."
"Edward, seriously, why are you going to all this trouble?" she was still in shock.
I couldn't wait any longer, I decided to tell her the first part of the news.
"okay, if you must know. Here's the first part of the good news." I paused, "I got my papers in for the army." I wasn't expecting this reaction.
"Edward… Its so dangerous." was all she said.
"I know but its what I've wanted to do…we've talked about this." and she frowned, but was smiling again.
The server as expected brought some 1882 wine.
"Edward seriously. This is to much."
I decided it was time.
"Bella…I love you more then anything in this world…" I mused getting on one knee.
"Oh my goodness!" She whispered as tears formed in her eyes.
"I've loved you since the day I first saw you…Will you marry me?"
She was speechless.
"Ye..yes of course I'll marry you!" I slid the ring on her finger, as she threw her arms around my neck.
"Good." I whispered in her ear, "I was hoping you would say that."
"Cheers," she smiled, teary eyed getting her glass, "To our future."
"To our future." and we took a drink of the wine, she kissed me on the lips.
"Until the day I die…" I whispered once more.
I'm writing stories out of the wazoo.
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Anyway.
I have had this idea for some time.
I just never got it down.
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