Updates:
Ok, so this is what's goin' on, I know it looks like I added a few more chapters, but really I didn't. See, the 1st and 2nd chapters that I wrote were bugging me because they were so long, so I cut them up into 2 smaller chapters, but I did add a new chapter, so Merry Christmas everyone!
Replies to reviews:
Silvermyth: not sure what part you are taking about when you say, "that Hiead would accept abuse from ANYONE, let alone his partner" so I'll explain all the parts that I see that could fit into this.
1: if you are talking about around the beginning when zero was about to punch him, he didn't cont the fight because he needed to go to his check- up, besides Raquel had already started walking and he wanted to tell her that he didn't need her help.
2: if you are talking about when they were fighting over the new program on his pro-ing and she kicked him and he just stayed down on the floor until he pulled her down, that was on purpose. He purposefully stayed down so he could pull her down and put her into a subdued position so he could win and make her do as he wants.
3: if you are talking about when her old partner started yelling at him, he would have continued the fight, but then Raquel woke up and her old partner stopped and you know what happened from there on.
4: if you are talking about the end when she pushed him against the wall and licked his blood, then don't worry, he will fight back. And sorry if they sound ooc, but it's hard to make them perfectly in character and not screw up the plot. Plus I have only seen the show and haven't read the manga *sighs* so I don't know to much about the other candidates and repairers, so I hope I don't fuck it up to bad.
Saiyan Warrior Princess: I know wolves don't have blood lust but some versions of vampires have wolves as their companions/friends, so I guess that's where I got the idea from. Sorry if I misplaced some things or misspelled words, I try to fix all the mistakes, but sometimes I miss some mistakes.
Little fire: thank you for the flame, your ignorance amuses me, but let me fix a few things for you
Sorry if this is turning out to be very mary sue like, but trust me, she is NOT perfect. She has problems and isn't as strong as she seems, as you will see in the chapters to come, and if she still seems to mary sue like, picture her butt-ugly then
I know there is no mixed animal blood in Megami Kouhosei but it just fits into my story, and I know wolves don't have blood lust, that also just fits into my story. Please, if you are going to read my fanfic, all I ask of you is to use at least a little imagination. If it really hurts you so much to see her blame her "violent urges" on her wolf blood then picture her as a hell hound, or maybe possessed by a demon or a werewolf, or something, just use your imagination or just don't read it at all. And besides, it is just a dumb story that I have had stuck in my head for a long time and would like to get out, so if you don't like it, don't read it
I know Hiead is self-centered, that is why he didn't let her fall. See, he knew that if she fell she would probably brake something and have to stay in the infirmary and make him miss a couple practices, then that would give Zero a chance to catch up with him and he wasn't about to let that happen. He is still a self-centered asshole, even if he did let her fall he wouldn't have cared if she got hurt or not, he would probably get in a fight with her and hurt her more if that happened because she made him miss a few practices. I promise that almost all of the time I will have thought out things like this and have an answer to why things like that happen. And have a nice day too.
btw I forgot to tell you this in the first chapter, but anyway I forgot to tell you that Raquel sleeps like a log, and it is usually hard to wake her up unless she has had enough sleep, another thing about her that is different from mary sue.
Sesshy's-girl: wow someone actually likes it! That's pretty cool that you wrote a poem called Tears of Blood also, I would love to read it, I love poetry! ^^
Firedemonryoko: wow another fan! I thought I'd be getting more flames XD anyway thanks for the review!
Disclaimer: don't own anything except the plot, Raquel, Dagao, and Kouta.
Ok, so this is what's goin' on, I know it looks like I added a few more chapters, but really I didn't. See, the 1st and 2nd chapters that I wrote were bugging me because they were so long, so I cut them up into 2 smaller chapters, but I did add a new chapter, so Merry Christmas everyone!
Replies to reviews:
Silvermyth: not sure what part you are taking about when you say, "that Hiead would accept abuse from ANYONE, let alone his partner" so I'll explain all the parts that I see that could fit into this.
1: if you are talking about around the beginning when zero was about to punch him, he didn't cont the fight because he needed to go to his check- up, besides Raquel had already started walking and he wanted to tell her that he didn't need her help.
2: if you are talking about when they were fighting over the new program on his pro-ing and she kicked him and he just stayed down on the floor until he pulled her down, that was on purpose. He purposefully stayed down so he could pull her down and put her into a subdued position so he could win and make her do as he wants.
3: if you are talking about when her old partner started yelling at him, he would have continued the fight, but then Raquel woke up and her old partner stopped and you know what happened from there on.
4: if you are talking about the end when she pushed him against the wall and licked his blood, then don't worry, he will fight back. And sorry if they sound ooc, but it's hard to make them perfectly in character and not screw up the plot. Plus I have only seen the show and haven't read the manga *sighs* so I don't know to much about the other candidates and repairers, so I hope I don't fuck it up to bad.
Saiyan Warrior Princess: I know wolves don't have blood lust but some versions of vampires have wolves as their companions/friends, so I guess that's where I got the idea from. Sorry if I misplaced some things or misspelled words, I try to fix all the mistakes, but sometimes I miss some mistakes.
Little fire: thank you for the flame, your ignorance amuses me, but let me fix a few things for you
Sorry if this is turning out to be very mary sue like, but trust me, she is NOT perfect. She has problems and isn't as strong as she seems, as you will see in the chapters to come, and if she still seems to mary sue like, picture her butt-ugly then
I know there is no mixed animal blood in Megami Kouhosei but it just fits into my story, and I know wolves don't have blood lust, that also just fits into my story. Please, if you are going to read my fanfic, all I ask of you is to use at least a little imagination. If it really hurts you so much to see her blame her "violent urges" on her wolf blood then picture her as a hell hound, or maybe possessed by a demon or a werewolf, or something, just use your imagination or just don't read it at all. And besides, it is just a dumb story that I have had stuck in my head for a long time and would like to get out, so if you don't like it, don't read it
I know Hiead is self-centered, that is why he didn't let her fall. See, he knew that if she fell she would probably brake something and have to stay in the infirmary and make him miss a couple practices, then that would give Zero a chance to catch up with him and he wasn't about to let that happen. He is still a self-centered asshole, even if he did let her fall he wouldn't have cared if she got hurt or not, he would probably get in a fight with her and hurt her more if that happened because she made him miss a few practices. I promise that almost all of the time I will have thought out things like this and have an answer to why things like that happen. And have a nice day too.
btw I forgot to tell you this in the first chapter, but anyway I forgot to tell you that Raquel sleeps like a log, and it is usually hard to wake her up unless she has had enough sleep, another thing about her that is different from mary sue.
Sesshy's-girl: wow someone actually likes it! That's pretty cool that you wrote a poem called Tears of Blood also, I would love to read it, I love poetry! ^^
Firedemonryoko: wow another fan! I thought I'd be getting more flames XD anyway thanks for the review!
Disclaimer: don't own anything except the plot, Raquel, Dagao, and Kouta.