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"Frisk"

"Chara"

This is an AU also if you could help me with making some puns for Sans add it at the end of your review and I'll credit you on the chapter I use it in. I enjoy critics and welcome them with open arms. This character is pretty much an OC if you hadn't noticed. This is not a self insert she is simply a character I've made up nothing more nothing less. Also it would be appreciated if you let me know of how to improve myself. Some things will be canon other things wont so do not tell me, "Oh that's wrong the game doesn't do that," because I am well aware of that. This is a FanFiction if I stayed on the original story its not even worth writing now is it?

Memory's Chara vs Frisk.
A Undertale fanfiction by Bookie10Florina9889

Prolog...

My name is Claire, I'm a kid, and I've been stuck in this never ending cycle for far to long.. What cycle you ask? Well you'll have to follow my last journey in this world; this world called Undertale. It all began with one purpose in mind. That purpose will be revealed in in due time. But I will tell you it has to do with saving and sealing and/or destroying a certain demon.

I opened my eyes to see the hole I'd fallen into. I'd seen this exact hole far more than I'd like to count. The golden flowers had always cushioned my fall. They smelled sweet, like butter cups as they always did. I stood up brushing myself off. My earthy brown pants, green stripped shirt, and the golden locket on my neck as my usual attire... No wait, something isn't right... I'm supposed to have a blue and purple stripped shirt.. Oh never mind I wasn't gonna complain I was sick of the other shirt anyway.

I walked down the cave, after getting up, to see a familiar flower. I didn't know if I hated him or if I pitied the creature anymore.. "Hi I'm Flowey, Flowey the flower. You're human aren't.." he spoke as perusal I dodged the 'friendliness pellets'. I watched, with a bored expression, as his creepy flower face grew more disturbing by the minuet. But right on cue Torial came in and stopped him, with her fire magic, 'saving' me like usual. I could just kill him now but that wouldn't solve this. It would just make me have to reset again. Hell to the no on that option.

Torial kind hearted as always led me down the sickeningly familiar paths. Don't get me wrong. I loved this goat woman to death, but after going through this exact day as many times as I have it wasn't as comforting. Not with the things I was going to have to do... She left me alone again and I made my way down the halls.

That was until Froggit got in my way, "Um I-I'm not sure why I'm here.." that poor shy Froggit stood in my path. Kill him...kill it now! I looked down at the quivering and now very injured Froggit. "M-mercy," he pleaded I lowered my stick and backed away clutching my head. I hated the way she tried to control me. I never even agreed to let her inside me in the first place.

I made my way towards the house, but I was stopped by Napstablook who was pretending he was asleep, once again. I smiled slightly remembering him. "Could you please move?" I asked, and he looked at me nervously. Those, nervous, ghostly onyx black eyes down cast looking more at my shoes than my face. "Sorry.. I'm in the way.." He floated to the side. "It ok Na-what's your name?" I smiled as a little bit of sweat trickled down the back of my neck. "Oh I'm Napstablook..." he said, "That's a cool name, can I call you Napsta for short," I asked, and his face turned a slight blue as he floated a bit higher off the ground. "Oh, um s-sure.." He floated away after saying that.

My smiled dropped slightly as a sad smile took its place. He's such a nice guy.. Kill him! "No!" I argued shaking my head and started walking. Dang-it now the other one was bugging me!

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I finally made it too get to the little yard in front of the quaint house, and I decided to take a seat near the tree. It's soft leaves were quite comfortable. During the time until Torial came back I mulled over the monsters I'd beaten up before this. I played with the phone in my hand my head filled with thoughts. Thoughts of the people I was going to meet again flooding into my mind, and how I was going to have to hurt them all again.. "Oh child how did you get.." I looked up my eyes showing all of the pain previously hidden behind them for a split second.

My hazel eyes feel on Torial, "I like butterscotch and cinnamon," my then eyes went back to their usual calm like before. Torial stared at me surprised, but she just patted my head, "Oh my child is something bothering you? You're un harmed aren't you," Torial questioned looking me over for injuries. She spotted some blood from the various other monsters I'd hurt to near death from earlier on my stick, hands and knees. "What's this blood?"

"I trip a lot.." I answered my eyes looking towards the quaint house behind the tree, "Oh well let us go in, I've made butterscotch pie.." Torial didn't push it, but she was planning on asking again later.
I went into my room and laid down. The lights off as I buried my face into the pillow. I sniffed hugging that pillow to me as I let out silent tears. Stop sniffling and just kill EVERYTHING! That voice in my head made me sick. I hated this I really did. I was just.. I was just so tired of hurting everyone. My eyes grew heavy and I fell asleep.

Moments later, after I'd fallen asleep, the bedroom door opened letting in the halls bright light. Torial smiled and placed the slice of pie on the desk. She brushed the child's hair, but her finger stopped seeing the traces of tears still on the girls face. "Dear child what could cause you such tears," Torial frowned to herself, but left the room deciding that the girl needed her sleep more than she needed her answers.

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Torial's mind stayed on the child as she made her way to the door that went to the outside. A soft knock came from the door and she smiled a small smile. Her heart lifting ever so slightly knowing her friend was back with more humorous puns.

"Who's their?" Torial wondered chuckling slightly to herself. After all she knew full well who it was. Nobody else would bother knocking on this door after all. "Nobody," came a voice from behind the door, "Nobody who," she played along smiling again to herself, "Nobody knows who," she laughed but not as much as usual.

"Hey Tori, what's up? You're not acting like yourself." he expressed a rare concern for this odd woman. After all she was a good friend, "Sans if a human comes through this door could you watch over them for me?" He paused closing an eye socket. Before thinking much of it he agreed and said "Sure its a promise," he said, his eye glowing a faint blue as he felt the girls presence inside.

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I woke up to see the pie on the desk rather than on the floor this time. I paused for a moment considering that was entirely new... Perhaps that meant I was doing the right thing this time? No mater how much it hurt it caused in the end... I got up my black hair unnaturally perfect as I put the pie in my inventory. I then went past Torial into the kitchen and grabbed the chocolate bar. I also cut myself another slice of pie for the road. I walked past Torial again who was engulfed in her book. I went down to the basement and was just at the door when I heard her foot steps behind me.

"Torial.. don't make me fight you please.. not this time," I murmured, the shadows of my bangs hiding my eyes. They hid how my eyes fought back the tears they wanted to shed. I opened the door hoping I wouldn't have to fight this time, but a fire magic attack narrowly avoided my head and hit the door. I let go of the door and turned towards her. I looked up at her before I advanced, dodging another fire magic attack.

In no time I found myself standing over her. I could see her life was just barely away from zero. I steeled myself as I turned my back on her, "I asked you not to make me hurt you Tori... It would've been nice if I could've just stayed as your child... but I can't.. I've got to destroy something for good," I backed away dropping the toy knife. "Please.. don't get in my way again.. mom.."
I then made my way into the cold snowy forest. I shivered this sweater wasn't much help against the cold as usual...

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End of the Prolog

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Side note yes I do realize this is rather close to the original game but this is just the spring bored for the rest. Chapter One officially breaks off from the original for the most part. If you have any questions that aren't about major plot points of my story feel free to review and I shall get back to you as soon as possible.

Have a wonderful day/night.

Sincerely Bookie10Florina9889 or just Bookie from now on.