Summery:
For the most part the star wars episodes one, two, and three were well… not great. I was going to completely rewrite them but I could not find a good way to do it so I just added a new character and some other new things so she has a back story in and kept most of the plot making a few changes to it here and their
Chapter 1
3rdPersonPOV
The three jedi knights sat and waited for the negotiations to start
" Ok I know I normally fall asleep like 10 minutes before these things start but is this one taking really long to start?" Maryin Jinn asked
"No you don't" Obi-wan Kenobi said, "we normally sneak off and get in trouble"
" Well our master thinks I'm asleep"
"That's because you use magic to make it look like were still there."
Qui-gon Jinn listen to his to apprentices fought and waited to be able to stop them. By now he was waiting for them to fight. They always did.
" You two" Qui-gon interrupted, both looked him, he finally got their attention "When will you two stop hating each other"
"Oh he stopped hating me like a month after I showed up" Maryin said
"Yeah turns out she's a pretty rich girl with a soul" Obi-wan said
"Great now on to more important things" Qui-gon said "there is a lot of fear here for something like this"
"Master I think the diocsus might be more of a problem right now" Obi-wan said pointing to a vent with what looked like white smoke coming out of it
diocsus
Both of the men started to hold there berth, Maryin snapped her fingers and a breathing bubble appeared around her head. Qui-gon and Obi-wan just glared at her
"if you wanted one you should've asked" she said
Qui-gon pointed to the door and had a look on face that said "just open the door"
"fine" Maryin said in response to something that had not even been said with that she opened the door.