I think now I know, why I never manage a good story for this fandom, I'm writing the characters, based on other fanfics I read, instead of basing on the original context.
So here are a couple more mistakes, I hope you do not mind, I'm wasting space with my nonsense, but that's what I have for today.
NUPTIAL NIGHT DIALOGUES
At their first night as a married couple, Roger and Julie lied on Roger´s bed on the loft, enjoying a bit of intimacy. They were completely alone, despite of still not having their own home. That´s why Maureen and Joanne urged Mark and Tom to find another place to stay for the night, to leave the newlyweds completely alone.
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The room was dark, they were lying in bed, holding into each other. Sure, as a positive man, Roger was afraid to hurt his new wife, but after making sure, nothing was going to happen, they just lied there, enjoying the moment and it was cool.
''you have beautiful eyes, you know?'' Julie whispered, caressing his face and Roger just wrinkled his nose, that it was worth having a pair of eyes that did not work.
''you smell like heaven'' he sniffed trough her hair. ''I wish I could see you, Jules''
''you see me with your heart love and it´s beautiful'' she said as Roger traces his fingers over her face and neck
''I did a lot of mistakes in my life, starting by get involve with drugs and God punished me twice, first with the disease and later taking out my sight. You, are the first real good thing that happened to me, thank you''
''you´re welcome honey'' Julie laugh ''I also hadn´t a nice life, for the past years, I didn´t get involved with drugs, but almost. Plus some abusive relationships…without mention, I'm the only nurse at the clinic that smokes, so, yeah, if we put this way, you´re the healthier thing that happened to me, from the past five years'' she said.
''so I think Mark is right, we´re really made for each other, two trouble souls, trying to fit in this world'' Roger said and both laugh in conclusion. ''I never thought, I would fall in love again, honestly''
''what you mean?'' she asked, lying on his chest
''when i made myself and my girlfriend April, sick, she killed herself, because she hated the idea of having HVI and I don´t blame her'' Roger started ''than, comes Mimi, one night she came into the loft, asking me to light her candle and urged me back to real life. Still, she left me, after I lost my sight, so, I kind of, close my heart again. Till you appear''
''and almost hit you over'' Julie remembered how they had met ''baby, I'm actually thankful for Mimi'' she said and Roger frowned.
''what you mean?'' he asked confuse
''well, if it wasn´t for her, I would never met you, so yeah, I do really thank a completely strange woman, for making met the love of my life'' she said, as Roger turn to her side, facing her, with closed eyes.
''you know baby, I think you really had hit me that day, killed that poor blind man on the spot and in his place, a new me come out, still blind, but more mature. Thank you so much for this''
''well, that´s good to hear! At least you wouldn't press charge'' Franny sad, kissing him.
With that, they sleep in each other arms, happy to be there, enjoying each other presence. The next day, they had promised mark, they would start to search into new places, to start the new life together.
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