OK this is my first fan fiction, so tell me if you think it has potential.
SM owns twilight and character
The day that started everything was just another normal day for me. I woke up, went to school, and then work, and after I get off of work I would have to go make Charlie dinner because we both know that he has absolutely no skills in the kitchen whatsoever.
I had just arrive at Newton's, owned by Mike Newton's parents, the place of my work. That was the only good outcome of Mike obsessing over me so far, it was easy to get a job here. After I said hi to Mike I was walking towards the back of the store to the break room to put my work apron on. There were no cars outside in the parking lot when I pulled up so I assumed that no one was in the store. Then out of the corner of my eye I saw a bronzed hair boy. As soon as I turned to look at him he looked away, which made me think he was looking at me, so I continued to walk back to the break room and change.
When I came out I went to the aisle where I saw the bronze haired boy. When I got to the aisle he wasn't there so I began to walk to the front of the store to the cash register to see if I was needed there. I was almost to the front of the store when I saw bronze out of the corner of my eye again, I looked down the aisle and the boy suddenly turned away when he saw I was coming towards him. As I walked closer to this boy I noticed that his hair was unbelievably gorgeous and it made me just want to run my fingers through it. He also was very tall compared to my five feet three inches; he looked to be at least six feet.
As soon as I was five feet from him I asked, "Hi, can I help you with anything?"
"Uh no!" he stated, but it was in a whisper making it hard for me to hear him clearly.
"I'm sorry, I couldn't hear you, could you repeat that?" this time he turned away from the shelf and spoke in one of the most amazingly attractive voices I've ever heard.
"I'm sorry," he said shyly, "but I was just looking, thanks." Then he looked into my eyes and he starred at me with some of the most amazing eyes I've seen, they were a dark green and his black glasses made them stand out against his pale perfect skin on his face and his bronze colored hair.
I felt like I wanted to giggle, but I don't know why.
"That's fine, my name's Bella and if you need anything, I'll be in the front of the store." I smiled at him and then he just starred at me with those amazing eyes of his as I walked away.
As I walked to my spot at the cash register I still couldn't wipe the stupid smile off my face that the beautiful boy put there. There was no one else at the store besides Mike and his parents and that amazing looking boy.
So my mind began to wonder about the boy. I had never seen him before and he looked my age or maybe a bit older. I knew I would have remember HIM if I ever saw him before. He was just too beautiful to forget. Maybe he was new to Forks; I would have to look for him at school tomorrow.
Then I noticed that the boy was walking towards me and I began to get all nervous. I started counting his steps toward the cash registers. I noticed that he had bait for fishing in his hands, that must have been what he was looking at earlier but I was too busy looking at him to notice.
I started to smile again when he was close to the cash registers and he looked like he was heading towards mine. Then at the last second he went towards Mike. My smile began to fade as I watched Mike ring up his bait and as the boy paid for it I swore he looked over his shoulder at me. Then he just walked out of the store.
I tried to keep myself occupied the rest of the day, but after I had made Charlie supper and had done the dishes my mind wondered about that beautiful boy.
I just wanted it to be tomorrow to see if he was at my school.
When I arrived at school the next morning in my beat up truck I wasn't paying any attention to my friends, Alice, Angela, and Jasper, I was too busy seeing if the boy was here.
The morning went by without the boy in sight, so by lunch I just gave up.
As I walked to sixth period biology I sat in my assigned seat. I was the only one in class yesterday who wasn't assigned a partner because my partner didn't show up on the first day of school. I was picking at my nails when someone sat beside me.
I'm pretty sure my jaw dropped.
It was him! The beautiful bronze haired, green eyed boy from the store!
I starred at him then he look up at me.
"Uh, H-h-hi…" I began to stutter but was interrupted by the teacher started class. We didn't do any partner work today so I was unable to talk to him, and as soon as the bell rang he basically ran out of class. I just starred after him.
My last period was Spanish, which was boring because I don't really get the point of learning another language if I'm just going to forget it, so I wondered about my beautiful boy.
Whoa Bella…your beautiful boy? You don't even know his name! So I just thought of him the whole time I was driving to work at Newton's.
When I got to my cash register Mike tried to ask me out but I made something up about hanging out with Alice.
Then all of the sudden there was a big crash that sounded like it came from the bait aisle.
"I'll go check that out." Mike said.
About 2 minutes later Mike comes back with the beautiful boy!
"Just watch where you are going next time." Mike told him.
"I will and I'm sorry, again," The boy told him embarrassed.
"Bella I have to go clean up some bait that Edward here knocked over, would you mind checking him out?"
So his name was Edward? And Mike didn't have to worry I was already checking Edward out! He was just so tall and his body seemed toned under the black, sort of tight shirt he had on.
"Nope, I don't mind at all!" I tried to make that sound less excited as I actually was.
Edward walked up to my cash register and handed me the same type of bait he bought yesterday, it was only a dollar and 15 cents. Please lord, let him give me a twenty so I have to count change and he has to stand here longer.
"Umm your total is a dollar and 15" I told him. With that he handed me a twenty. Yes! As I started to count his change, I tried to start a conversation.
"So I saw you in school today." I said
He cleared his throat then answered in that amazing voice of his "Yeah, I saw you too, you're my biology partner." He said that while looking down at his feet. He seemed to be shy. I had finished counting up his change and put the bait in a bag.
"You bought the same thing as you did yesterday?" It came off as a question I guess because he felt compelled to say, "Yeah, umm, my dad, he uh likes to fish." He made a strange face like he was hiding something but I let it slide.
I smiled then I just thought about how stalker-ish I sounded. I remember that he bought something from Mike yesterday, wow now he thinks you're crazy! Way to go Bella!
Then I just said, "No way my Dad like fishing too!" Then I preceded to hand him the bag. Then it was awkward, I just starred at him and he just starred at his feet.
"I guess I'll see you tomorrow." He said.
Oh right he has to go, he's not obsessing over a complete stranger!
"Oh right, see you tomorrow and please come again!" I said to him lamely! I'll be thinking about you all night!
Then he just sort of smiled and walked out the door.
The rest of the day I day dreamed about Edward. And what it would be like to run my hands through that hair!
The next day was a Saturday so all I had to do was work at Newton's.
I was stocking up the bait aisle when I noticed someone was standing next to me.
"Oh, Edward! You scared me I didn't see you!"
Sorry Bella, I was uhh just getting the b-bait"
"Oh well hear you go, do you want me to check you out?"
"Yeah, sure, I mean, please"
I smiled to myself thinking of a different meaning to those words.
He bought the same thing again, like those past two days. This time I decided to ask him something else.
"Why have I never seen you around before?" I asked
'My family just moved here this summer."
"Oh cool! Well, welcome to Forks, it's sort of boring, but yeah."
Then he made a chuckling noise that made my knees weak. "Actually, it's not that bad so far." He said smiling.
I smiled back and told him bye and that I'd see him on Monday in class.
This time he looked me in the eyes with his amazing green eyes and said bye.
And I'm now fascinated with Edward. I can't wait until Monday.
