Alright, as you saw in the summary, this story has been re-edited. I will not change the author's note in the beginning and ending of each chapter. So, this is my very first chapter for my very first fan fiction story. Please comment on how I do.
Prologue
Somewhere up in the mountains of Magallanica, the wind violently blankets the cliff side with white sheets of snow. Hidden under the blizzard, the Invaders seemed to be camped out on the mountain side; constructing new weapons out of sight. Seen through binoculars; Spring Breeze Messenger sweat dropped, learning of what has become of his discovery.
As the white rabbit knight returned to her group's campsite, he rushed towards his commander's tent. "Agravain!" as he entered panting.
"The Invaders are here in the mountains." This troubled Agravain as he knew that if the Invaders were here, then there would be a chance of an all out battle. Their priority was to gather intel and to provide support if any complications. and if the fight was to draw out, there's a high probability of an avalanche and no survivors. Agravain waved the knight to leave. He needed time to plan a strategy.
At another knight's tents
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Sitting on his bed; sharpening his arrows, Bruno was lost in his thoughts, thinking back in his memories.
Flashback
Dark smoke covered the air as Bruno ran through the streets; finding his home. As he returned, his heart sank as he saw it demolished. Behind the smoke, he saw a silhouetted dragon-like figure becoming more and more out of sight. He also saw someone else in its hands. That was before he realized that it was his father. Bruno tried to reach him, but more fires arose stopping him.
After the raid was over and the fire died down, Bruno clenched his fists in frustration as tears trickled down his face, realizing that he was to weak to save his father. Soon after, Bruno decided to join the knightly order. In hopes in finding his father's kidnapper.
End of Flashback
Bruno sighs and lay on his bed. Taking in the moment of peace.
(I didn't want to include the other knights and their tents, but they are Zoigal, Gorlois, Marron, Gallatin, Elixir(Liberator), Gold Lancer, and Black Mane Witch.
In the tent far from Bruno's
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Sitting on her bed, Igraine too was lost in her thoughts as she held her blade close to her face, see her eyes in the reflection. 'It's easy, just go up to him and say it with your chest? ... Wait, no thats not ... *groan*' she thought to herself as she laid down. Igraine was a new recruit who had joined the order in two months ago and this was her first big mission when dealing with the Invaders. She even volunteered for this mission, but for a different reason.
When beginning back at the Sanctuary, she was quiet nervous at first. She wasn't as skilled with the a sword, unlike most other knights starting out as she would often made mistakes. She was about to give, until she met him.
End of Chapter
Sorry. I'm new with this story making business. That's why my first chapter was so short. Please let me know how I did in the reviews.
