naruto's wrath

chapter one xxxxxxxxxx

it was a bright and sunny day for most people of the Konoha no Sato.Rushing past the villegers that hated him for something he could'nt control,the hokage tried so hard to keep the secret from slipping to the younger generation only those 18 and older heard the s-class secret,but that did'nt stop the civilian council from making the boy's life a living made this day worse than the others was that it was naruto's birthday"october 10".every year on his birthday naruto suffered constant beatings even some numbers of konoha's shinobi hated him for what he was a jinchuuriki ,not even the anbu could do anything about this perticular day naruto's 8 birthday. 'demon brat' some villager shoughtings grew more louder as more villager's joined moment naruto regreted the decissionhe had made.(flashback) naruto checked his whole apartment for something to eat."damm nothing"naruto said out loud."it look's like i have to go outside".(flashback ends) naruto started to sprint back to his apartment for safety, he turn's back to see if anyone was following and sure enough the villagers were right on his tail with sharp objects to make matters worse he saw 3 dozen chunin nins with the group there was also 4 jounin nins in the group but were unseen by naruto,naruto sudenly picked up speed changing routes ever so often the were still gaining on him and he was quickly runing out of energy he hoped ojisan would find him before he was beaten to an inch of his life,the road he was runing on came to an end he just prayed somone would save him before he died."well well it look's like the demon's in a corner"one chunin said,"let's kill the demon"a civilian mob charged having an intention in killing beat him till he was breathing blood,he layed on the floor a bloody pulp he never fought back he alwaysed smiled when he was beaten whithin an inch of his a jounin nin came fowerd ready to deliver the lethal blow,naruto then heared a voice saying to him "USE MY POWER KIT" the bellowing voice of Kyuubi no Kitsune then everything went blank for naruto...(A.N) this is my first fanfic i hoped you can help me improve pls would apprietiate reviews idc about flamers all i ask if you tell me it was good,bad,needs improvement, also i am going to continue this story thank you for you time

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