Ok! I'm writing a story, tell me what you think!

Chapter 1

As we approached the ivy covered gates i couldn't help but think- Melanie, what have you gotten into?

We pulled up and the security guards waved us ahead. We pulled up to the

old, beautiful mansion. I stepped out of the car in awe.

But hold on a second. Before I get ahead of myself I should tell you the whole story,

Shouldn't I? ok, Well i should warn you first what happened to me is real, no matter

what you want to believe. So, it all happened last year...

(That's the end of chapter one!)