Heres the remake of Naruto: Rise of Darkness. The Naruto/Darkness crossover fanfic

"Talking"

'thinking'

"Darkness"


Power...

That word brings to mind many things.

From the power of words. The power of military might. The power of having money.

What if one didn't have such power? In a place where power ment everything?

This is the story of such a boy.

Naruto was running down the alleys of Konoha knocking over trashcans and whatever he can find.

He was being chased by someone.

Ever since he could walk he had seen the ire of the people around him.

Most of the times they kept to themselves not looking in his direction and simply attempting to forget about him.

Sometimes a villager would get drunk and he would chase him. He knows if he were caught he would be hurt...perhaps badly.

Such time was now, the difference being that the drunk this time was a trained ninja and not some random villager.

Naruto looked back and saw that no one was behind him.

He accidentally hit into someone and he fell down.

"I'm sorry I didn't mean...to..."

He looked up and saw it was the drunkard who was glaring down at him.

The drunk picked him up and slammed him against a wall.

Naruto gasped in pain "I...I said I was sorry."

The man giggled "Sorry? Boy you are gonna be even more sorry when I'm through with you."

He gave a strong punch to Naruto's face making his face bleed profusely.

Naruto stumbled back

"w..wait please."

he was punched again.

Naruto collapsed to the ground in pain.

The man laughs and starts to kick his chest.

Naruto can taste something like metal in his mouth.

'Darkness...all I see...is darkness...' Naruto thinks to himself as he is kicked again.

"The darkness." a hissing voice calls out to him

Naruto's eyes widen.

'who...who are you?'

"I...I am the one called Darkness. Do you wish for the beating to stop?" it asks

Naruto groans as another kick shatters one of his ribs.

'YES...PLEASE...MAKE IT STOP...make it stop...make it stop.' Naruto whimpers to the voice as he is kicked again. Tears fall down his face like a river.

A dark feeling envelops Naruto.

"I had hoped to not intervene for a long while. but making you mine now does not seem so bad."

"do you truly wish to end the pain? Then swear your loyalty...to me." it says with a deep and threatening tone

"I SWEAR." Naruto shouts.

the man stops.

"Swear what you evil creature?"

A mist envelops Naruto. A carapace like armor covers him from neck to toe. Two snakes form and crawl out of his shoulder blades. They hiss and snap at the man. Naruto's eyes start to flash yellow.

A dark feeling starts to radiate from Naruto.

The third wakes up.

"NO..." he whispers getting up from his bed.

Naruto stands up.

"I am the executioner...I am the darkness waiting...the fear of the dark..is not so farfetched...as you will see." Naruto's voice fluctuates between his and the Darkness's.

The ninja takes a step back.

"What the hell are you doing?" He takes out a kunai.

Naruto grins at him and his snake lashes out lighning quick and eats his hand.

The ninja falls to his knees tryin to hold back both the blood from his hand and the tears coming to his eyes.

"P...please show me mercy...I'm sorry please don't kill me." the ninja says begging for his life.

Naruto nods his head "I should...mercy is a mark of a great man." the ninja nods vigorously.

Naruto looks at the ninja.

"I do not consider myself a great man."

The ninja only had time for his face to form one into a face of pain before the snakes ate through the man's chest cavity and ate his heart.

Naruto felt something...power. it was...addicting.

"Naruto!" someone said behind him.

Naruto turned to see the 3rd hokage and several jounins looking at the scene shocked.

"Yes old man?" Naruto answered.

"What happened here?" the hokage said moving to hug Naruto.

Naruto took a step back "I killed him...he was going to kill me."

"Jesus." a voice called out in the group of jounin.

The Hokage shook his head.

"Naruto...I understand you wanted to protect yourself."

"Leave this place." The Darkness said.

'Alright' Naruto didn't know what or who this voice was but it seemed to care for him.

"Old man...I wish to leave the village...I want to learn from my own experiences."

Sarutobi mulled it over "Very well Naruto...will you come back for the genin exams?"

Naruto nods.

"Very well."

"Then I...Sarutobi the third Hokage permit you...Naruto Uzumaki...leave of this village until the day of your return."

"Hokage do you find it wise to-" the ninja was interuptted by Sarutobi.

"He is in great danger here...the villagers will not accept that a boy killed a full fledged ninja...it is safer if he were to leave."

The ninja bowed "Yes...my lord Hokage."

The Hokage made a motion with his hands and all the ninja's dissappeared back to their posts.

He looks to the west gate where Naruto seems to be headed 'I hope you find what you need, Naruto.' The hokage shakes his head and goes back to his office to attempt to sleep.

As Naruto walks out of the gate. He looks back 'I shall return konoha.' he thinks to himself. 'And when I do those who hurt me...will be punished.' his eyes shine yellow for a second then return to their blue color. He turns his back on his village and walks towards his travels.

'Good...soon, Naruto, soon...you will belong to ME.' A dark presence says within his body.


Woot I have a girlfriend and a gaming group so I won't be able to update quite as much but don't worry, I'll still do the chapters. And it won't be a years long update waiting time

So? What do you think?