Family, friends = loss

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Family, friends = loss

I thought we were safe,

At last we were there.

Next to my father

Yet my mother aware

We spoke for a while,

I bayed him good-bye.

Not knowing he was gone..

Lost like a shadow in time.

Yet a servant told me.

Of a rage and a fury.

And then it clicked,

His death was upon him.

A spark was a light,

I hoped and I prayed that,

That time was still full.

And death was at bay.

Yet limp and lifeless,

There he lay.

My childhood friend.

Not able to play

My heart was broken

Not just for the loss,

But knowing my parent

Just knowing them, was enough

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