'Going Good, Then Bad.'

**Ok. First I would like to thank some peoples with their reviews.

Infinitys-End: Thank you for all of your help and I am trying my hardest to do what you are saying. Just give me time to catch on to what you are telling me. Thank you for not flaming me.

james6751: Thank you for telling me that. A lot of peoples told me about Beta Readers, but never what they were.

Kaltia the Shadowcat: Don't be so mean. I will do better eventually.

Lhachel: Thank you for all of your help. I appreciate it.

Neshomeh: Thank you for not flaming. I am at a website of how to spell everybody's names and learn more about them. And sorry about changing their names.

Starbrat: Thank you for helping a little. I am trying.

Maryn: *smiles* don't worry. I am working on it. And what is Internet shorthand?

And I especially like to thank Infinitys-End. She helped me a lot! And I am sorry. None of my stuff seems to have spell check. I will try the best I can and I'll even go to a dictionary if I have to.

Now, on with the story, rewritten the 4th time.....

*Marie's POV*
It was a dark gloomy day at Orlando, Florida. Everything was so dark and creepy and the thunder and lightning didn't make it any better. It was raining hard, so hard it was like a thousand people banging on your roof as hard as they could. There was no tornado warnings, thank goodness. Marie was sitting at home reading a book under a dim candle lights. All the electricity has went out and now they used candles or flashlights. She was reading Lord of the Rings: The Fellowship of the Ring, for the third time. She was in her room in the far side of her bed. She was in love with the character Legolas. She almost looked like him. It was starting to get chilly out, so she grabbed a blanket and wrapped it around her tightly. The banging of the rain and the sound of the thunder and lightning was giving her a headache and the dim light made it even worse. So she put the bookmark in where she was at and picked up her cell phone. It was fully charged so she dialed her friend, Ann's phone number. It rings a couple times and Ann finally picks up. "Hello." Ann asked a little nervously. "Hey. It's me." Amber replied cheerfully. She through a Advil in her mouth and took a sip of icy water. "That really helps." Ann said sarcastically. "Oh. Heh heh. Sorry. It's Marie." She answered and hopped on her bed. "Oh. Hey. Hold on, Cathy's on the other line. I'll transfer her here." Said Ann and jumped a little at the sudden crash of thunder. "Alright. I'll wait." Marie said and played with a deck of cards. Ann flashed. Marie sat there. She was playing Solitaire. She got frustrated by the fact that she didn't have all the cards and threw the deck at the wall. It made a loud noise and the cards slid to the floor. By the time she was halfway done picking them up, Ann came back on the line with Cathy. "Hey, Marie, you still there?" Ann asked. "Yah." She answered a little frustrated. "What's your problem?" Cathy asked annoyed. "Oh. Nothing. Just I wanted to play cards and I don't have a full deck and this raining is giving me a big headache and the thunder and lightning doesn't help at all! So now I have a headache! And it gets no better by the second!" Marie answered loudly and fast. She threw herself on the bed and put a pout face on. She rubbed her temples and smiled, "Sorry guys. I didn't mean to yell at you." "It's ok. I have a headache, too." Ann smiled. "Why don't we talk about something." Suggested Cathy. "Ok. Like what?" Marie asked. "Why don't you two come over to my house?" Ann suggested, " My parents are cool with it." "Alright, I'll be over." Marie said and hung up. "That's nice." Cathy said slowly, "I'll be right over." She hung up as well. Ann sighed and hung up.
It was like a miracle, as soon as Marie walked out the door. The rain slowed down to a drizzle and the thunder and lightning stopped. You could begin to see the sun come out. "Whoa. Creepy." Marie said and her body shook. She shook her head and thought of it as a coincidence. She went back inside and grabbed many bags of candy. She went back outside and hopped on her bike and rode off. By the time she got to Ann's house, it was getting dark. She felt a cold breeze brush on her pale skin. She tightened the jacket and she walked up to Ann's door. She rang the doorbell and heard someone running down the stairs. Ann opened the door and smiled. "Nice to see you made it." She said and let her in. Ann closed the door behind her. Marie took off her coat and threw it on the coach. They went upstairs and saw Cathy sitting on a daybed. She was putting a DVD into a Playstation 2. She waited and it started playing. Marie and Ann pointed it out to be Lord of the Rings: The Fellowship of the Ring. Ann went back downstairs as Marie sat by Cathy. She put all the candy on the table and they began eating it. Ann came back upstairs with a bag of popcorn and set it on the table. "I see someone brought candy." She said and looked at all the candy. She looked at them. "What. No room for me?" "Huh? Did you say something?" Cathy asked like she didn't listen to anything she said. "Aw. That hurts." Ann puts her hands on her heart and looks like she is about to fake cry. "It's ok. You just need a hug." Stated Marie. She got up and Ann sat in her spot. Marie turns and looks at her," Now that's not fair." "You move your feet, you loose your seat." Ann said triumphantly. Marie crosses her arms and stands in front of the TV. "If neither of you move over. I will not let you watch the movie." She said demandingly. The two girls whined and scooted over for Marie. Marie sat on the daybed and they started the movie. While the movie was playing, Cathy started mimicking everything Galadriel said in the beginning. Marie and Ann look at each other thoughtfully. It was like a light bulb was over their head and there was and it just turned on. "Whoa. Now that was scary." Ann and Marie say together. There faces turned from freaked out to a playful one. "Jinks! You owe me a soda!" They said together. "Since you both said it at the same time, I get the soda." Cathy exclaimed. Ann and Marie looked at each other. They looked at Cathy and started throwing pillows at her. Cathy starts laughing and throws them back. Pretty soon they were throwing pillows everywhere. Ann's mom walked in and a pillow came out of nowhere and it her in the face. The pillow fell to the ground and everything went silent. The look on the mothers face was of pure shock. She shook her head and looked at the girls. "Alright. Who threw it?" She asked and looked at the three girls suspiciously. She crosses her arms over her chest and taps her foot. The three girls point at each other. "She did it!" They say together frightened. The mother smiled. "I don't care who did it. Cathy, Marie, it's getting late. Are you two going to be spending the night?" She asked and looked at the two. "Yeah." They say together quickly. The mother hands the phone to them. They each call home and ask. Both parents said yes and they smiled at each other. They threw more pillows at Ann. "Now you have to deal with us all night." Said Marie triumphantly. The mother took that as a cue they were staying. She left and shut the door behind her. "Yah. You might wake up tomorrow on the other side of the street." Cathy said and rubbed her hands together like she was some evil genius. She even laughed like one. The whole room went silent. You could hear a cricket chirping outside. "I'm just kidding. God. Can any of you take a joke?" She said a little frustrated. "Yeah. Sometimes." They say together. They all start laughing. They look at the TV screen. It was already at the part where he putting on the ring and everyone gasping ends Bilbo's party. "Man. Restart it." Marie says and sits on the daybed. Cathy goes over and restarted it. They all sat on the bed and started watching it, again. Cathy mimicked Galadriel's voice. Throughout the whole movie, they mimicked everyone.
By the time the movie was over, it was around midnight. The girls turned everything off and decided to throw the 12 empty candy bags and popcorn bags away tomorrow morning. Cathy fell asleep on the daybed, Marie slept on the floor, and Ann slept on a recliner chair.

**Did you like? I hope I did better. I had a friend read it over night. He said it rocked. I am sorry if I didn't spell some words right. They look fine to me. Review if you liked or review if you didn't like and wanna give me some help.**