Kamui: Before, I had tried to make it so the reader had a bunch of assumptions on what would happen that was a tad too confusing now what I will try is a different approach

Ch 1
Jack of all trades
"Brrrr, it is serously cold down here!" The youth stated as he was running down a slimy corridor "Get it together! The cops are overhead!" Another youth shouted as they were overwelmed by blue and red flashes as well as siren noises then the two stop "C'mon Zed Give it up the are clueless. They would much rether go home while being paid then chase us in a sewer! The'll never come down here!" Before he could say any more he realized that the cops were also on foot.
Zed whispers into his ear "Uh-oh! They heard your loud mouth going off again ,Red."
Red is to quick to reply "Shut up!" Just then the cops open the grates as their suspisions were confirmed. The two start down the tunnel as quick as possible when Zed stops "Take it and keep going!" he says as he hands the dagger to Red.
"I got an Idea to save us sense Red's adittude has blinded him again." He thinks to himself
"Freeze!" Zed pulls out a bag and swings it around grabing the cops attention.
Zed quickly looks for a nervous cop then he throws the bag at him and runs. at that moment an explosion goes off blinding the cops Zed runs and hides behind a large pipe when the cops recover and charge for Red. Zed spots the nervous cop again puts a cloth on his hand and grabs him while covering his face instantly puting him to sleep then puts on his suit and radios the cops telling them that the criminal had been aprehended as soon as they got to him Zed handed them a fake dagger.
"Congradulations!" Everyone shouts as they think that peace is restored while in Zed's head he is laughing as he has now obtained a new relic selling on the blackmarket for 1,000,000 gil
"Wait! We've gotta delete the case on the jack of all trades!" a drunk cop says after way too much partying. Zed is now home free as he sneeks out of the completely oblivious room of drunks. "It seems the punch was spiked." The thief reamarks with a grin on his face
"That was a pretty low blow for a thief." a female cop says interupting zed's little moment of joy. "What are you talking about, woman? a few too many drinks?"
"Settle down leroy-" zed looks at his tag "I was only kidding." She says with a hint of frustration.
Zed leaves the police station with a sigh of relief and walks to a train station thinking if she was smart or really just kidding.