this is my first m rated story so please don't hate it. review and give me feedback on what i can do better and ideas for the story.

So my name is max and this is my story.

I was seven when I was kidnapped and sold into slavery. Not working slavery but as a sex slave. I'm sixteen now. I guess it isn't all that bad. before I was kidnapped my parents were drug addicts and I had to raise myself. Here things are different.

To start out, i'm still a virgin. At this company( as I overheard it's called Itex) they like to keep the girls virgins for as long as possible to sell them at a higher price. We also get fed regular meals that are very health as to keep use in good shape. Everyone works out everyday in areas like running and sit-ups. Itex likes the girls to have flat stomachs and high stamina. The girls get a little education, mainly in health and sex ed, but also in areas like math, social studies, and science. We're aloud to watch TV, we mostly watch the news, go outside, and talk to each other.

So wile i'm apposed to the idea of a sex slave, the life here is actually better then what i remember of my old life. Oh, and there really organized here. There are three girls in each room, we all sleep on nice beds, and there are ten beds to a wing. Each wing is directed by one man, our man is Jeb. there are four wings and ten floors, every single one is full, there are exactly 1,200 girls in this building

The entire thing is organized by age. 6-10 on the bottom floor, 11-15 on the second, 16-20 on the third 21-25 on the fourth, 25-29 on the fifth, instructors on the sixth, exercise on the seventh, food on the eighth, business on the ninth, and the tenth floor is for education.

All in all this place is nice. Only a few problems, if you get sold or if you never get sold. when your sold you move in with the buyer and they can do whatever they want with you, if you reach 30 without being sold then you become the instructors. They get you for there pleasure, and i heard they don't go easy on them. But there are few who don't get sold.

My room mates are Monique and Ariel. I consider them sisters. we have been room mates since the beginning. Monique was captured at seven too and was roomed with me when I first got here. Ariel was taken at seven but was moved into my room when I was eight because of a sale.

You see when a girl gets sold shes usually between 15 and 27. this changes the age arrangement, so they move people around. This girl was 20 so it was a big move. Everyone under her shifted by one. Monique just moved into my new room ( I was slightly older so I was moved first before she was) and there was one other girl a couple of days older than me. She was moved into the next room wile a new girl moved into our room, Ariel.

Now that that's clear i should tell you one more thing, we all have slutty stage names. It was a promotion with the business to make us sound better. So I should tell you ours, mine is maximum ride, Monique's is nudge( I personally didn't understand how that was slutty but oh well), and Ariel's is angel( now that one I understood, she looks like one). I also forgot to mention what we look like. Nudge has brown frizzy hair that is out of control and mocha skin. her eyes are dark brown. Angel has blond ringlets of hair and pale skin with blue eyes. I have dirty blond( or honey blond as nudge calls it) hair, tan-ish skin, and milk chocolate eyes as nudge says.

There now your all caught up on me and my strange life.

please review and give me ideas, i run out of them fast. I'll add fax next chapter though.